Why did ziva catch a train into work? They were both going in same direction, your making tony out to be something other than he's not

Wonderful story. So well written and their voices and actions and thoughts are spot on. Now has become one of my favorites. Will cherish it over the heartbreak the show gave us. Bravo

I am years late but wow this is such great writing for them. It’s rare I continue reading a story for them bc it veers out of character or over the top dialogue - this feels so spot on I can see the scene in my head. Can’t wait to keep reading :)

Why didn't Tony get off his back and offer to take Ziva home what a dipstick.

I am just reading now but wanted to comment. I understand that you were quite young when you wrote this and have to say 'YOU ARE VERY GOOD. WELL DONE'. Chapter 21 was one of the best. I had to stop reading the A/N because they were giving too much of the story away. I like surprises. :) I am one that does not usually read one shots, but will look to see if you have any other lengthier ones as I started at the bottom. Take care and consider writing more now that we have to get our TIVA fix from FF.

Thank you! This is a lovely story! I just discovered this.

Oh my goodness! Once I started this, I couldn't put it down! Everything about this story was so perfect, it gave me chills! It was a privelege to read! You are a truly talented writer! :)

I know I'm a bit late to the party here, but I have to tell you, this is the second Tiva story of yours I've read and I absolutely love you! You are an amazingly talented author. Also, I think our muses may be long lost siblings because mine has a tendency to be moody and needy and refuse to write oneshots as well. I can't wait to read more of your work...after sleep (because I'm sick and in addition to reading your 70k words I've written 2500 of my own, watched three episodes of NCIS and taken a couple of naps today and it's now late). Much love to you Zay!
AJ

I really liked this chapter

Ziva is the only one for Tony and visa versa. Kate and Tony just didn't do it for me. I like the story so far and am glad to find yet another enthusiastic fan of NCIS, who also writes well and can carry a plot. Kudos to you my dear.

it was a good story i enjoyed it alot... but i wish it was longer i like the length of it as it is though i wish this stroy had some action in it like ton or zivas ex's come in to play or one of them get taken or some thing like that i also wish the got married and had kids but all in all i liked it
thanks

Wonderfull story, with room for improvement, but if this is indeed your first Tiva fic I'm impressed, certainly. And it is noticable that in the beginning of the story there's less of a plan and/or outline I think.
Thanks for writing and putting it out here so I could enjoy it!
One thing, though, you should consider cutting down on the A/Ns... Too many of them and too long, they take away from the story. I stopped reading them, just glancing them over, and of course that works, but you might want to consider if they are always really necessary and have to say all those things... I understand it has a certain gratification for you and it's nice for you to put it down, but I think it's ultimately unnecessary.
Anyways, just a thought.

Very good chapter again. At least IMHO much better than the previous one.

I didn't like this chapter, unlike the ones before. I know it is Abby, but seems OOC for Abby and Ziva, plus too contrived, sorry.
Hoping for things to pick up again

I think Tony's conversation with Gibbs is one of the most original ones I have read in a really long time! It's very original and actually perfect.