Ragna should have said something about Rin’s voice sounding very similar to a certain vampire(Rachel Alucard)

Uh...was it just me or did you just reference DIO's Stand the World?

Eh, I feel like it was out of character for Sephiroth to freak out when his attack was averted. If anything, he would've scoffed, frowned or smirked. Other than that great chapter.

SHIT! You mean Saïx was the Berserker Fourth Holy Grail War?!... Nice.

Wow, I never noticed the similarities between Ragna and Sephiroth.

Was that a Rozen Maiden reference?

I always love rereading this story! If you ever wanted to make a sequel to this story, I would read it in a heartbeat

Wayyyyyyy to OOC with Sol

Drat. . .you could have pulled an alternate Epilogue. . .one with Rin. . .10 years after the Grail War. . .and she with two children. . .Sakura, and Ragna . . . her twin children from the Bloodedge. . .

Thank you for a nice, heartfelt story.

Did you really give Sol his Dust Loop as an actual combo? That's just too silly for words. XD

haha nice gurren lagann reference, guess it would have been just a little unfair to actually give ilya simon as her bezerker, he would qualify considering how he acted after what happened to kamina

good story so far, keep up the good work!

Lightning? As a Servant?

I smell plagarism... ;]

DESTROY SHINJI XD