Update ASAP pls?

...happy birthday. I was reading your story and I saw the date on your A/N. I realized today is your special day, so have a good one! :)

-Ann

omg i love this story!

Yeah the organization is destroyed, Teresa is alive and so is Irene, Clare is a claymore, Galatea and Miria are together, and Flora is alive! Everything is where it should be, but aww for Yuma and Tabitha :( Speaking of which, where's Helen and Den-Den? I miss those two. I hope they will be in this story and no one else gets killed. I like where this story is going, very interesting and entertaining. Please continue :)

This certainly is entertaining , as you're pairing many wanted claymores together :

Miria/Galatea ( my Favorite ), Teresa/Irene , Clare/Opheila ? i would like to see some of that . I wonder who Flora might be with though , Undine probably ? and you didn't mention anything of Deneve and Helen . i don't think you killed them in the fic ; still , ...it's your decision .

it's quite a thing you have here , heh . Looking forward for more !

- Z -

Continue please, it would be a shame for it to end simply like this. The climax has yet to appear and the same for characters. Update plz

Nice story. Waiting for the next update. Just one complaint though. You used "tonsil hockey" as a euphemism for french kissing. Its a small detail, but it kills the realism of the story. lol Well, I was reading along nicely when I got to that part, and it sort of jarred me out of the Claymoreverse.

ahhh you are so evil, leaving it there just when it was getting cute and steamy with Miria and Gala. Also I wonder what happen to Irene's team. I better see a longer ch. next time and Happy Belated Birthday, a Scorpio eh? thats cool.

Since everyone wants to read the prequel, if your not up for it you can always use flashbacks. I don't mind about that since I seen fics with the "what if Teresa never died" thing going on. As for you, you started writing once when the Org went 'down' I never seen/read a fic starting like that. They never killed Rubel perhaps he has something up his sleeve you never know what's that man's true intentions, and there is still other continents to explore and wipeout some yomas. Looking forward to read some more.

hmm...a very nice chapter...and i really want to see a prequel...anyway..you ask for ideas email me if you wish.

Not often you find good stories. Its just that you're missing 7 or 8 years. I guess you summed it up, Clare trained with Teresa, and I should be satisfied with that. Its a nice story after all.

But 8 years missing? That's just too much. If I were the org and number 1 was on the loose, I'd send my strongest after her. Maybe Miria would have been sent to deal with Teresa. You know, pit a trouble maker against another trouble maker. Sigh... I could be a devious man in black... The point is, a lot of very interesting things could have happened in 7 or 8 years, and its hard to believe that the org would have left Teresa alone in peace. Hell, maybe Miria, Galatea and all the top-rankers of Clare's generation would have died trying to get Teresa, by order of the organizattion.

I should have just said I was satisfied... sigh

Hi there!

This being your first fic, I must say that I'm quite impressed and so I'll reward you with a well rounded review.

I like that you're not repeating yourself (an issue I'm struggling with in my fic) and that the story has a smooth flow so far. I also like the dialogue which is great and that the prose is error-free. Writing a first fic can be daunting, mine was average but you indeed show promise with this one.

However, I am pleased with and worried at the same time about this fic. Pleased that what you're going for is bold but worried that I think you'll have some or a little difficult with it. Like the other person said, it will indeed rely a lot on prequels so I hope you're up to the task.

All in all, I won't give you any ideas because I think you're creative enough for that and because I don't want to know what's coming. .)

I apologise for the long review but I thought it would be useful to you.

Take care and keep writing!

-Poor Donkey

I do like where this is heading and im very interested in reading more from you.

ooo nice story it seems... in my hubble opinion publish a summary and not just in the chapter...also i would suggest a chapter that will tell what happened in the previous years, if you know what i mean...update..