I knew this title was familiar, but I can’t remember if I reviewed on it previously so here’s my belated words...

The dynamic between Miyagi and Shinobu is written PERFECTLY. Their energy honestly feeds off of each other in a natural, mutual way that melds together. Besides that, Shinobu is my love in this story (my favorite character written out of them all).

He’s given a chance to show his true intentions through his perspective and we get to know a bit more about his unique thought process. He’s a demanding, mouthy, little softie of a terrorist and you captured a lovable interpretation of both him and Miyagi, so thank you for that.

Story-wise, the plot is straightforward but nicely done. The events kicked off immediately and I didn’t feel much dragging on at all. If you want any nitpickiness or criticism about specific parts of your writing this, I’d be happy to help! ‘Til then—

Thank you for writing this. I look forward to seeing more of your works.

Author-chan? U still gonna continue this adorable story? Pleasee UD soon, i've been waiting for this for so long :3

Author-san? What's up? do u have any intention of updating? Lol i really like ur story tho :(

Wahhhh please update! You're an amazing writer so I hope you don't abandon this even though it's been like 3 years D': great story so far!

PLEASE UPDATE! You stopped right in the middle of the best part. And it's a great story so far. So please... UPDATE!

Is this story complete? Love the writing, but I've been feeling kinda cheated lately with unfinished fanfic.

Please continue!
I have waited for about one year now!
It's really good:)

Please just update soon! You cannot leave it like this! Xx

OMG I LOVE IT! please update!

Nooooo you can't leave it there and not update DDDD:

I liked this line: They spent twenty minutes doing nothing, while Miyagi was reaching his boredom breaking point? Miyagi wanted to strangle this kid just for letting him know about it. - Lol
Also this: The man stared down at the clearly fuckable person before him - Fuckable? Can I use that word? XD
Loved this whole chapter, honestly (this whole fanfic, in fact). I want more, but I can understand that you've got more stuff to work on (plus I read on your blog (or tumblr, I think) that you're going to end it in the next chapter). Good luck! :D

Kyyyaa, I love how Shinobu always wants a kiss. XD So cute! Loved this chapter- after reading all these chapters, I keep realizing how much I love Shinobu and Miyagi.

:( I like these fights, but the last scene was somewhat depressing. I hate seeing Shinobu and Miyagi be awkward, but I guess it's bound to happen. :/

Lol, that was fun to read. XD Go Shinobu! He didn't cry that much and he's still persistent!

Oh, gosh, where to start? I love Miyagi drooling after lasagna instead of Risako - I loved the panda gift and how Miyagi put those stitches personally so that Shinobu can never sell it. XD Omg, and he finally confessed!

Oh, and nice email from the stalker - lol, Shinobu though it was a gay porn ad. XD