poor sakura

keep writing!

They could meet up, more fluffy scenes kisses marriage then babies?

I would want to read it.

the tennis blossom plis

Omg please continue !

I really like this story but i wish it had more then that the storie's ok.

THANK YOU FOR CHOOSING MY IDEA! I loved this chapter!

whoa huge cliff hanger! now im excited!

Why did you make other boy appears (in their same class) and this boy recognized Sakura and give her a hug, after in lunch time (in the school) he go with Sakura to the terrace and give Sakura a kiss on her check and made Enma jelous? (he spied Sakura and the other boy in the terrace).

After he (Enma) discovered is her (Sakura's)...(any relationship)...

It's just an a idea... Don't need to do in that way...

when I said "their" is Sakura and Enma.

(Sorry my English is really bad :P )...

Oh! So the pairing is Sakura x Emma, right?

If it is, then make that the main story part, but you should add more action! Fighting! You know, the fighting scenes, oh! And you should make it so that the Naruto characters show up too! I wanna know what happens when they become a part of the story, it'd be so cool if Naruto (Naru-Naru!), Sasuke (Duck butt!), and Kakashi (Kashi!) all become jealous that their female teammate got a lover before them, oh! And can you make it so that Sakura has another cold past and that she has her ninja powers with her, she created over thousands of jutsus and uses them against Byakuran! CHA!

Don't end the story. Why not try using some of Naruto's scenes? Fore example, you can always uncover Sakura's true past as a genius of the long dead Haruno clan and Orochimaru or Akatsuki just crossed over to Katekyo and tried to abduct them or something. Lol, just a personal choice.

Erm...you could write about...other Naruto characters appearing in front of Sakura? Or...something happening during their time back to school...or...a trip? :L

I'm not sure, just making up ideas on the spot :P

here some crappy ideas XD:

Sakura P.O.V.

Even if Byakuya (forgott how 2 spell, val him Bya) have change i still thing he is the same persone. With out him i would really have rotten in this world. If it wasnt for him... He stopped the bullies, he taught me how to fight, he became my fiend... He have done so mych for me, so why did h change? Bya, i miss you.

(Blah blah blah, she meets him)

or something.

And you should have more squrtells (wtf, how does it spells? Anyhow, Sakuras weak point) in the story.

8'D

I think she and enma should go on a date and without them knowing have their friends spy on them.