I’m sorry the idea sounded good but the writing is so bad and it just doesn’t make sense. You’re not exploring the interesting points like how they were so young when they had the kids and what their parents said about that etc

loved it
keep going
can't wait to read more

Great chapter

Another great chapter I loved it

Another great chapter. It good Bella late Edward back i n her life an for the kids

Another great chapter I loved it

Great story

Another great chapter I loved it

Another great chapter I loved it

I like the story it's just most of chapters have to many songs your mostly writing the songs and not really focusing on the story

You have a great storyline (except for the fact that it's not realistic to be pregnant at 11 and 13) and you fucking ruin it with your mad writing. I need to say this - YOU'RE WRITING SUCKS. Don't get offended, just change the style and think more realistic. And get a writing coach or a ghost writer for this, you'll be just fine then...

Another great chapter I loved it

ahh when I read summary I want to read it right away but when you make Alice and Emmett parent are Esme and Carlisle make me dis-interested. I only like to read story that Esme and Carlisle they are Edawrd parents. good luck with your story.

please write more of this story

Pregnant and in love at 11? Yeah because that is so realistic. Why would she want to lose the Vcard that early anyways? Just a tip delay the pregnancy for a few yrs