Hey! Can I translate this? I mention your nickname for sure and have link on it. Pelasi, can I do that? :)

I love this for the ending. It's a well-written story, but the incomplete ending adds vitality. Thanks!

GAAAAAH! You.. you CAN'T just leave it there! This little one-shot was awesome but... but... Waaah! That ending just killed me! XD Still I loved it! :D

now that is seriously hot! all that sexual tension just pouring out of their pores! :P love the work! keep it up!

Oooh, good shivers! I like the subtlety underlying it all and the tension you masterfully wind up notch by notch. Impressive development!

This is brilliant and you are a wonderful writer. :3

I'm torn - this is a great piece, but you're running 50/50 in my odds on good and okay stories book. Some stuff, this piece included, is great, is true, is real. But some of your other stuff is not so much. *Sigh* It makes it hard to judge what to read an what to not.

Anyhow, this piece, though short is quite satisfying in an open ending sort of way. I enjoyed the pent up everythings, even if I don't approve of the need for fowl language (it could be stronger without in my opinion.) Don't get me wrong, it has its place and its uses - but I do not feel this piece is one of them.

Thanks, Jen

Loved this story! It was written really well and I love the idea of a jealous Ariadne and Arthur, please continue with it! :D

*awww* :D I think this is my fav part:

"You trust me with your life," he reminds her.

"But not my heart." His jaw clenches, eyes flashing anger, and she realizes she's hurt his feelings. "Arthur-"

"Don't."

*AWWW* *sniffle sniffle* I love it. I already loved it on LJ. Well I have a thing for this stories. *lol* Anyway yep, this goes so to my fav list again. :)

okay, really good and all but seriously, thats how you end it? gah! lol. i still think its pretty great, jelous arthur is funP.

great story!

:D

good story, I don't really like how he leaves with the roommate but she doesnt do it with anyone else doesnt seem fair, but good writing nevertheless

I love this story! The fluff was amazing, but you kept the characters realistic and believable! Great job! ]

Fabulous angst and humor all together - I love it! The characters are spot-on.

Ahhh omg so good! Wonderful story - nice work!