I enjoyed reading this story and I liked how you wrote the romance between Amy and the Doctor.

Ooo! The Doctor has totally fallen for Amy. Completely fallen head over heels for her! Poor Rory... What's going to happen to him? While I'm happy Freddie gets to have both his parents with him without the confusion of who's Daddy (if Rory were there that'd be an issue later on, along with the obvious tension between the Doctor and him), I can't help but be a little upset at Amy for just leaving Rory with no explanation. Though I suppose it would be hard to explain how she and the Doctor now have a son together thanks to an injection. So, i guess i can understand it, but the feeling is stubborn.

Cash is out. Peace!

Why

that awkward moment when ur mother in law has a crush on you

lol going back to Venice I see don't get bit by the vampires

PLEASE UPDATE. YOU HAVE TO!

Aw that comfort scene was adorable!

Heated? i thought it was good. Not some trashy, explicit sex scene. You perfected that scene and I thought it was tasteful without going too far :)

Best fanfiction I've found in a long time. And I can tell you know your stuff. I had to actually look up meconium to see if that was true, now I REALLY can't wait to have kids of my own...but seriously, great story!

This is epic

Awsome chapter keep up the creativity

wow Amy started a real bitch in this one

Amy is really starting to press my metaphorical buttons because the doctor clearly cares for her and will always be there for her She is the one denying him! not him denying her like she thinks!

Amy is being so unfair, she doesn't understand why the doctor doesn't want the baby. Amy's just being a right royal bitch not even asking why the doctor didn't want the baby. I think Amy needs to ask the doctor why he doesn't want the baby instead of slapping him and calling him a "prat".

Omg! Wait this can't be it! Please tell me it's not it. Pm me?