I loved this, it was so cute!

I loved your character set up it was nicely done all around a great story :)

I think this is my first review, but you SO deserve it!

I LOVE this story, and I'm sorry for lack of reviews! I ADORE Elyon, b/c she's just tt awesome.

If for no one else, would you do a sequel for me? Don't leave me hanging with that! Please!

With lots of love!

-Grace

that was amasing. i can't wait to read the sequal to this one. you did a really great job on this story.

Freaking awesome! I love this story and can't wait for you to update, and it's getting a sequel (hopefully) *cue fan girl moment* SQUEE!

Oh, I'm so sorry for your loss. I could really feel the sadness at the end of the chapter, and I liked it. You managed to portray the characters well as usual.

Im not a fanfiction writer or reader, but Im enjoying your story. Sorry I dont have much constructive criticism for you. The one thing that stuck out to me was the chapter where Logan is assesing the newbies fighting/sparring skills. Sting tells Logan she has experience as a street fighter, but sparrs with a traditional kung fu/praying mantis technique. That just seems kindodd.

I do like the spiritual aspect of Nightcrawlers character, goodjob.

I look forward to reading the rest of your story when you finish it.

Sorry about your cat.

This was a very powerful chapter. Sting's realization that she can't live without Kurt was borderline cliche, but I think you managed it well.

Way to go on this one! You did a brilliant character development.

Completely off topic, my mother named me for the Romani.

Wow, I like this story. Major plot twist! And you have done a very difficult thing in placing new characters into a canon settings and making them friends with major characters- without making them Mary-Sue. Good job!