Reviews for Figment
Ch4z chapter 15 . 4/22/2014
took me a while but i like Gerard,
trishnjefflover chapter 15 . 1/24/2014
Awww Jeff was imaginary:-( I feel sad (sigh)anyways please update soon
trishnjeffover chapter 13 . 1/24/2014
Trish is a good doctor:-P please continue
trishnjefflover chapter 8 . 1/24/2014
i dont like it when Addy gets hit it makes me sad:-(
trishnjefflover chapter 4 . 1/24/2014
Jeff is so Sexy!
trishnjefflover chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
Hahaha yehh i had a bitchy teacher too in 4 grade
takers dark lover chapter 15 . 10/31/2013
It's good that Adam told Gerard about what Jay did it shows improvement I think.
LadyDragonsblood chapter 15 . 10/30/2013
I just adore Hunter in this...and pray he stays safe. He's good for Adam.

This was a really sweet chapter amid all the horrors in Adam's life. Gerard was really sweet to give Adam the choice and a promise to respect that choice.

I really believe him when he says he didn't mean to set the Priest on fire...I honestly hope that is the case.

I like Trish too... so much better than Rosewood... I think she is actually helping Adam...

I hope he and Gerard do kiss... I think they need each other... I just hope "Jeff" keeps out of it!

GREAT chapter sweetie...MORE SOON PLEASE!
ilzehs chapter 14 . 10/17/2013
God...Now that they put it this way, I TOO am scared and bothered! Does it all connect? And Adam connect to it someway? We know what it means...I hope not...

I love the fact that you write some of my favourite guys being sweet to Adam because usually they are so evil! Love Hunter and his presence around Adam here!

NO! NO! NO! PLEASE NO! Adam has been through enough! Just...God...I hope Adam just skipped a dose and Jeff is a result of that!

Hunter being a big diva? Kehehehehehe I know right! Lol!

Gerard is so creepy but funny! Him teasing Adam and Adam being so confused and jumpy...and him teasing bout Trishy made me lol. Adam is so defensive *snickers*

Gerard has nooo idea. Haha, them calling each other girls shows you how much of girls they are :P but not in a Jay way. In a fun way *shudders at the memory* I do wonder if these flashbacks and horror memories will ever leave Adam alone...

Okay, this whole convo and moment between Adam and Gerard is very amusing. I dunno but it is VERY well written. Gerard seem very comfortable with his creepiness, while Adam is still catching up with all the insanity he's accused of and still confused and innocent on so many levels. He's so jumpy and unsure...tells you how scared he really is. Gerard sound like a really funny creep...but that last part...even though he was coming off strong, Adam's reaction must have confused the hell out of him. Jay will ALWAYS haunt him. I hope Gerard and Trish are not on the next victim list of 'tragedies'.

Couple of WONDERFUL chapters. Such an amazing story. Still going strong. Can't wait for more!
ilzehs chapter 13 . 10/17/2013
Apologies for late reviews! Both the chapters kept up with the amazing story so far and this is such a wonderful treat for any reader in every form and way because the writing just keep getting better and better! You are an angst queen. There is no doubt about that. Jilted, Sold, Memories and Figment, they all are some of your best work and still fresh on my mind. Because they had such a impact. I am also very happy that you are regularly writing back on these stories because I miss your writing a lot and you should know that your fans still care and love deeply what you bring to us in your wrestling fanfiction.

Finally the pieces are put together and Adam is so drained that he's ready to accept it. Its all very well explained. The psychological factor in this story is really well played. VERY well written. It all make sense now. Although, I am still uncertain about Jeff, but I hope that Adam can make his way out of this misery and be in peace. This also tells you to what limit his mind got fucked up. And that doc is still fucking rude. I want her away from Adam.

Jeff in that scene with Adam...Its all so scary and mind fucking. You can't help but feel terrible for Adam whether its him who's fucked up or if its really some Jeff being.

When Jeff's POV come, I get confused all over again and some things make me wonder if he's a ghost or something. Whatever he is, he needs to be away from Adam because otherwise, Adam will remain in this fucked up place forever and there's no hope for recovery or a normal life.

Oh God...You know reading about their parents is just really tragic on its own. This all seem so unfair..So unreal..But it has teared their family apart. No surprise Judy feels guilty. But again, this was bound to happen and what's done is done.

As a writer, you have successfully managed to put all the bits together for us to have the understanding of the situation, but have still kept up with the mystery of what Jeff exactly is even to this point. Which is brilliant.

Damn...This all seem really weird...Doc...Staff...Randy...Adam is finally doing better. I hope something doesnt fuck up with his mind again.

Trish! Doesn't surprise me that Adam find her comforting. Such a sweetheart she is. And so gentle with Adam. I think this is gonna help him. I just hope any tragedy doesn't strike her since she's near Adam. Aww and she brings him donuts! Adorable!
Rhiannamator chapter 14 . 10/14/2013
Hmm, if Jeff is in Adam's head, & Adam's in the asylum, how are people that did Adam wrong dropping like flies? Interesting.. & Jeff's not as gone as Adam thinks. Aww, i loved Hunter looking out for Adam. He's always such a villain in fanfic, it's nice seeing him being a protector.

Gerard is cracking me up. He's so darkly carefree (hehe, demon), & poor Adam just doesn't get him at all. & his flashbacks are heartbreaking, poor baby. & he's so scared.. i feel bad for Gerard being pushed, too. He didn't understand. Hopefully Gee can get Adam to relax a bit.. bu that might let Jeff back in..

Loved it & can't wait for the next update! *snuggles forever*
takers dark lover chapter 14 . 10/13/2013
Hmm so Adam seen Jeff or did he just think he did? Gerard should have tried to talk to Adam not just kissing him.
LadyDragonsblood chapter 14 . 10/10/2013
Okay it was actually scary to see this story updated today. Last night, as I was laying in bed thinking, which I do a lot, I JUST thought of this story, and I was thinking I hope she updates it soon, and DAMN if there wasn't an update when I woke up. I will SWEAR this really happened!

I like Hunter and the way he is with Adam... I hope that doesn't make him the next victim!

It made me sad to see Jeff pop up again, because I thought Adam was actually getting better...but for now, at least it was just once.

I would say Adam had done the people in, but no way would he do that, and how could he get out to do it...then there is Gerard...he can move like a shadow... is getting out somehow and killing people that have hurt Adam? LOVE that character...was scary with the doughnuts though...and Adam apparently still blanks out when hurting people...

It is just so sad to see Adam like this, but damn girl you do it so well...

EXCELLENT CHAPTER and please UPDATE SOON!
Rhiannamator chapter 13 . 9/1/2013
& it finally all comes out. I wonder if anyone really would have believed him if he'd said something, or if Adam would have gotten the treatment he needed anyway. Perhaps it's for the best, as Adam is finally on the path to some sort of hope & there's one less predator in the world.

Fucked up that Rosewood can't tell the difference between rape & lovers. Of course, i didn't see Adam mentioning that Jeff kinda forced it on him, too, in the name of love. Still, i wonder what's going on with Jeffy now. Interesting that he knew they'd be separated. Also interesting that the people making Adam's life uncomfortable are starting to die all around him.. but Adam has no access outside the asylum..

Still, at least Adam is healing, & things are being salvaged with his mom. Does she blame David in any way? It wasn't his fault, really.. i wonder if their relationship will survive the trauma. & hooray Trish & Gee! It was fun to see Gerard squirming around in his cute but creepy baby bat way. & always that bond between Adam & Trish, just as things belong. So good that he has someone to open up to. & yet there's Jeff waiting inthe wings..

Loving these frequent updates, darlin. Keep it up! *loves on*
takers dark lover chapter 13 . 8/31/2013
Good chapter I like the "accidents" the staff are having. Might it be Jeff? Hmm?
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