Reviews for Travelers
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2015
I know i'm too much late for review now, but this story warmed my heart in odd ways. You portrayed Sayu humbly, without adding too much unnecessary thoughts or words. You captured a younger sister-maybe a jealous one but also dependable and real and down to earth and realistic. Its really good.
Hayasaka.Shion chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Great story! The way you portrayed Sayu really fits, and Light doesn't feel OOC at all, which is a great achievement. Keep it up!
Bridgettalladega chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
This was such a wonderful story! I always enjoy seeing a more human-aspect of Light, and the way you wrote it really was so believable! Great job:3
TripOverFlatSurfaces chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Yep, they definitely don't give Sayu and Light's whole sibling aspect enough screen time. If only it was like this in the actual series. *sigh* :3
Nardaviel chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
Interesting. I've never thought of Light driving before. I always sort of assumed he didn't know how. ... It's quite an attractive thought, isn't it? He -would- look like a movie star. That bastard.

AHEM ANYWAY

This, THIS is absolutely perfect:

"So, even though Light is a genius and can charm anyone he wants to whenever he wants to, Sayu will always be happier and thinking about that makes her a little bit sad."

The rest is quite good, though I'm still not sure I agree with the premise (afaik people in Tokyo walk or take trains a lot more than they drive O_o and do the Yagamis even have a car? and would Soichiro have time to teach Light how to drive? although I lol'd a lot at that part), but that sentence makes the fic.
muumuu122 chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
This is very cool :) I like the idea that at least at some point Light was a bit more human. "She knows Light felt this way, he told her" especially is lovely because just aww, he wasn't always just faking it to everybody. I loved this :)
Vashtijoy chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
"Je ne regrette rien" is one of my Light songs, too. I really like this. :) Not enough people write about Light and Sayu.
kara chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
nice, i really love this view of their relationship
plannedbyReaperLight chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
Nice! I love this!