Well... What I would say? My English isn't good, and I only try to read this fanfiction because I'm playing Pokemon White. So, you know, when you play the game is impossible to not falling in love to N. Well, White and N really results in a beautiful pair. So I was stopped here.
Sincerely... You had a great work here. I'm in love with your story. Your story really like a part of the original story, and the development of the characters was incredible. And this confession and the kiss on the end?! That's soooooo cute! I really like it. Thanks for writing this, made my heart feel warm and happy 3
Sorry for my bad English, but I has to congrats you to this.
Oh, if you have another story with these two, you're welcome to recommend that for me okay?

ik gen V is after gen I and all, but wouldnt it be great if a woman named “white” would have kids named after different colors? *cough*red*cough*

Like think about it:

-Red running off to live in the mountains

“So youre telling me our son, instead of coming home or even just visiting, has decided to go live on a mountain with his pokemon?”

“Yes.”

“He gets this from your side of the family N.”

lol just a thing that popped into my head from this story, honestly i do hope you write a sequel of just their adventures, especially to other regions

AMAZING

I actually think that N and the player might have left the castle together, since after the end of the game Cheren faces you outside your house to tell you that that freak Ghetsis scaped, and if the player had left normally making all the way back trought castle and league they probably would have heard of the bitch escaping...
Or maybe player just flew home on Zekrom...

Wow, really love how you write! I love how everything isn't rushed, and how everything is just so detailed! Absolutely love your writing, will be looking forward to more!

Me encanto I love ️️

It's so cute and adorable! I love this fic so much!

I can't tell you how many times I've read and re-read this fanfic! Its amazing! Epic mixture of lemon and danger! You made White a great character, just like in the game(s)! And you perfected N! I've read a lot of fanfics where N is such a child or stupid, but here he's still smart but ignorant on a couple things, he has his concern for his friend and bravery for her when she was taken! It reminded me of pkm bw2, when he came at the end. You did an excellent job and I hope you make a sequel!
Thanks a bunch for the awesome fanfic! :)

Hi... I know it's been a long time since this was published (or whatever), but I really enjoyed reading this! It's my favorite N x Touko fanfic.* And I'd really like more, so why don't you write a prequel if a sequel won't work?

*Because all the others are about N imprisoning Touko... that's just scary/unrealistic/boring to me.

Thnx! v

Thank you for writing this. N and White are the only shipping pairing I fangirl over, haha!

This is so sweet! I love this story!

It has been so long since I read this fic. The first time was probably when you first wrote it because I was waiting anxiously for the next update. Haha..

I love this fic so much. More now than I did then. Probably has to do with the long hiatus I took from .. But rereading a story I read long ago is like reliving the tale. Its fun and exciting. Especially if you forget everything.

You are by far one of my favorite authors on this site. Your writing style is so unique and inspires me to become a better writer. Please continue writing. Even if you don't write for the general public and it's just for yourself, keep on writing. :)

Maybe White should have zekrom

I LOVED every moment of reading this! It was so interesting and you described everything so well. My favorite part was the confession scene, but the battle against Kyurem and Ghetsis was well done too. And I've read so many White x N fanfics where N is just...stupid. Some writers take his situation to the extreme and really make him act inhuman. I think you captured his personality well though, so great job and thank you for writing this! :)

That was a short but sweet fanfic, I really enjoyed it. You managed to develop their characters and writing an interesting conflict with Ghetsis. And the end was sweet, I really like N's innocence and awkwardness. Good work!