I am extremely impressed by how well put together this story is! I give it 100000000000000/5 stars!

Poor Sho but I'm happy for Ren & Kyoko. Pls update soon.

Cute... Makes me want to smile. :)

Your story was really cute :D I would like to point out that I as correcting the incorrectly-correct spelled words. :) It happens to the best of us. Especially when we just want to get the story written then out there because we are so nervous. I do the exact same thing, then go back and replace it with the proper grammar and such. Sometimes, I just ignore too. In any event, you did wonderful on this one-shot and it was well thought out!
Sam

wonderfullllllll!

This is cute! :} But I wish that Sho would have fought for her a little... Is there a next chapter?

cute

Hahahah that moment with Kuu was funny

Good one. I can only imagine the major hurt for Sho. But as the saying goes you don't what you've got till its gone.

typos and grammatical errors here and there are evident but i still like this story in the end errors doesn't matter if you have a cute storyline. .~

Loved it... Especially the part were sho suffers love it... Awww and also when ren finds out that kyoko is pregnet... Please keep writing

nice story about sho,, but actually I hate him.. :P

Great story so far! I can't wait to see what happens next. Sorry to all the ShoXKyoko fans out there but this is what he deserves.

hehe for some reason I had a feeling she was pregnant from when you were describing her dress.

A nice and simple story, it was nice to read; though I am slightly curious as to what Sho will be thinking/doing now

Except for the typos in various places, it's a nice story. I like how you torment Sho. :D