Plz update

What. The. F.

Please finish this second version.. it seems that the first SS was very OC but this one fits the canon characterisation more.

Seroiusly your stories need updates... readers starving! feed us chapters.

Hope you decide to finish

Hi! I really enjoy the content of your story. However, I noticed that there were some timing issues in your fic. In the fic, Snape says he was only with Draco for 6 days or a week, but the way it reads makes it sound like much longer. Just something I noticed!

more please! :)

Now that! Is throwing a fit. F-ing Snape

Ok where is the rest? Thanks

Please update soon Draco needs his ass kicked by everyone for hurting Harry even Severus because what he did was wrong harry should deny him his Black Inheritance that he gets from mommy dearest in front of Severus and everyone in the great hall!

Great start. I liked the first version but this is even better you can better understand the characters thoughts and feelings. I can't wait until you find time to add the next chapter.

Great story.

oh no, whats gonna happen now?!

Good God will Harry be ok hope to see more soon

I think you are doing great rewriting the story
it's more realistic and the gaps and awkwardness between scenes are much less than the last one.
it's really fun I love the before one I believe I'll love this one too!
hope you update soon!