I love Lu Ten! This was very moving

Oh thank you for this

FEELS. ATTACK OF THE FEELS. This is really good, I like the idea and you wrote it out very well. _ Thanks for sharing your writing, I really enjoyed reading this!

This was beautiful

That's so beautiful. Oh my word. I loved that image at the end. That Iroh can see him as he finally disappears.

It was interesting how you wove this together. How he was always there. Always whispering, guiding. Trying to figure out where he is in the story now.

Silent watcher and supporter. *smiles sadly*

Oh God. I just reviewed one of your other Avatar stories and already I'm compelled to write another. You are awesome, just...you are awesome. The feeling of this piece, I don't know how to explain it- but it's perfect. And it sticks with you too. The idea of this story is poignant enough, but the way you write it really brings that out. The style is matter-of-fact, it's kind of like the emotion is implied, not told. But that just sort of shines a light on that emotion...I don't know, I hope that makes sense. Anyway, it's safe to say I love this story. -Leigh

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So beautiful and so sad ;A; I love it.

Wow... *U* T.T This is SO BEAUTIFUL! Rock on! Amazing work! Man, having Lu Ten watch over all of them, out of his nation and loving as always...! *U* Man...this is beautiful! Rock on! T.T *U*

Very touching. I'm not much of a critic, but I liked it, at least. Keep up the good work.

*sniffles*

This was beautiful. Well done.

(And I can not explain how HAPPY I am that you included Azula. A lot of people seem to think Lu Ten would not have cared much for her, but I like to think he cared about BOTH of his cousins and I'm really really happy to see someone else who does, too.)

I love how Lu Ten had some kind of impact in everyones lives! Wonderful as always~ *throws fudge at you*

This was kind of sad. You, my friend, are a good writer. Try a longer story, one with a few chapters.

This is really touching and realistically done (as realistically as ghosts can be done lol). I suppose what I mean is, everyone is in character and Lu Ten's actions though small help things turn out as well as they did.