I adore this. I like how you altered the story a bit. I imagine kaito would never agree to being Rin's fiancé but I guess he used it to throw it back in her face later. Even though Len saves rin later, it's still a good alteration.

I like this story a lot. Please write more :)

? hu? i don't get it at all

Wonderful, refreshing take. Because this is rather incredibly original and I can see it has thought put into it.

I like it when stories do that, be all poetic-like and such. It looks nicer, personally, and it doesn't work for too many stories but you know, yeah, this one's one of those that do. So yeah.

THIS. SHOULD BE RATED ANGST! D': BECAUSE ALL AKU NO SERIES FALLS UNDER THE EXTREME ANGST LABEL.

I THOUGHT NO PROPER CAPITALIZATION WAS PRETTY INTERESTING.

SO I'M HAVE TO UPPERCASE THIS REVIEW TO MAKE IT BALANCED.

That was so poetically beautiful, I think I'm speechless. This was a refreshing take on the idea; that Miku killed herself loving both Len and Kaito equally, just like Len loved her and Rin. It made me think, and I love it when stories do that. I also enjoyed the italics and lack of capitalization, because it gave it a softer look. Less harsh, in a way? I don't know why that is.

So, thank you for writing.