I really like this pairing for some reason

Oooh, does Gold know a bit more than he's letting on? Anyway, I really enjoyed this! I liked the added bit with Red worrying over his Pokemon instead of his own well-being. Sounds like something he'd do.

Can you say KAWAIINESS? 333333333

Keep it up! 8DDDDD

You need to work on your grammar.

Awesome story! I enjoyed reading it to the end. Continue with the great work!

luv!

Awww~! So fluffy XD Its so sweet, I like it :)

Is your first language English? Do you have a beta? I see some grammar mistakes... and you seem to be alternating between verb tenses quite a few times. Please stick to the first one you use when you write; it's one or the other, not both. "Were," instead of "was," and such. Some of your dialogue seems a bit stiff, too, and it's best that you don't be too familiar to the reader or use casual sayings. Try to "show, don't tell," in your writing.

Lance at the end! xD

Gee, this is so cute! Made me giggle and smile, so it's a sweet pick me up! Nice, really!

I love this, and hope to read more from you. c:

I adore how caring Red is with his pokemon. Green deserves a kiss for helping Red out of the situation with Lance. Though I do have a respect for the pairing of LancexRed. GreenxRed seems more appropriate.

Love the Green/Red pairing 3

and the story was fantastic!

I totally loved this, you should of made a second chapter to this!

It was wonderful I loved it so much a little shy red hiding his feelings genius

It was wonderful I loved it so much a little shy red hiding his feelings genius