Yay! I'm so glad you updated. It was an amazing chapter and I can't wait to read more ;)

this is an amazing story! i love it!

I want a cookie! :D I can't wait until they figure out who Christine is, and until I know how Max got to the hospital...

I confess: I'm completely, utterly confused. Not that I don't enjoy this change of pace, but what happened to Max? And Fang seems a little . . . er, for lack of a better description, NOT focused on Max. As I said before: Try to keep the story running along the lines of the summary. Because unless you plan to change the summary, this is not looking like the story I first looked into.

Look, I realize I may not be the most encouraging of critics or reviewers, but I'm only trying to help make the story the best it can be, and to inspire you to strive for the best you can! I am thoroughly enjoying the story, and can't wait for more! I gobble this up; click on the link, read it down, and recounting my thoughts within a minute!

~Fishy

Okay, I'll admit it, I've been hooked. This story is really interesting, and it's very well-written. I love how you switch between the present day and the flashbacks, those are well done, too. I can't wait to see where this story goes, but most of all I want to find out why Max is on her death bed. I'm guessing she's in a coma?

Anyway, you've got a lot of things going on right now, but it's cool. I like how you get snippets of everyone's events. I'm guessing Christine isn't all she's supposed to be. Maybe she's a teeny bit evil? But she's Nudge's sister! That's a new one.

I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work. :D

-Lea

I'm more excited then you about MR7 I want to read it so bad!

okay, none of this is suppose to sound mean in anyway

1. you need to update a little more often!

2. everybody who is in love with Fan-i mean the Maximum Ride books knows that Angel comes out Feb. 14th! (and i so hope she(Angel) dies! luved her in the first 3 books but now shes just a little bit-h)

keep up the writing! (love it so far by the way dont think i added that!)

p.s this is 388 words! : )

this is really good! Pleas update soon! I think ur a really good author!

It's a little confusing, but good writing. If you worked on keeping it to one or two P.O.V's a chapter it could turn out really good.

I like it.

Another captivating chapter! I await more eagerly. Word of advice: try to stick to one grammar time. Other than that, great work!

~Fishy

Yay you updated! That makes me happy!

This is a review for your whole story so far. Your organization needs a little work and all of the POV changes make it a little hard to understand. There is no doubt that this story has a great plot and good potential and that you are a pretty good writer. Keep up the good work. I'll be watching this.

you are sucha great author! Could you plz update soon! Pretty plz!

I really liked this chapter but got kinda confused on wat is happening in the end... so is it Fang is locked up in an emergency room or the whole flock? I liked it though! Great job!