Loved it

Tbh i just wanna marry Adrian. But without him dying.

Great story, thanks for sharing!

I’m so happy there’s a baby!

Oh what a good story & really like how everything turned out. Totally loved the whole extended family.

Normally I hate it when stories are cookie cutter clean in scenarios like this. Like how Harry was never "in-love" or he didn't get pregnant with the new spouse.

The truth of the matter is that relationships are messy. Not being "in-love" doesn't matter, loving someone else at all would still be incredibly painful and it IS moving on. Even with regret and sorrow, it was a new relationship. He did move on.

I'm not reading further, but that isn't because you chose for Harry to be pregnant again.

It's because Draco forgives because he "loves" him. The betrayal that Harry dealt here is a near unforgivable thing. Maybe with work Draco could forgive him, but to ever be in a loving relationship again? That was completely ruined the moment Harry moved away. He didn't love Draco enough to face him and ask why. He took his children away. He was a coward and completely selfish.

Betrayal isn't something you just set aside because you love the other person. It's because you love them that you can't let it go. To think Draco didn't do anything wrong. Harry actually betrayed Draco. There is no getting that time back. He missed out on everything.

You think he can just forgive that? Every time he looks at those boys he will be struck with the pain of what could have been. When he sees Harry he will know that Harry never trusted him. Harry moved on within a couple months of leaving him.

When you love someone, you don't just walk away. You cry and beg for answers. You try to understand. You think there had to have been some mistake, or some explanation.

Harry chose to leave? Okay maybe he can be forgiven one day. Make the story about the road to forgiveness... on how to let go of betrayal. That would be a great read.

Not immediate forgiveness. That's empty, hollow.

Very nice!

The biggest thing that bothers me about this is the part that is so horribly true. That a father, through no fault of his own, can somehow lose his rights to his children. It actually sickens me to think that that is how we run things. A father should have as much of a right to his children as a mother. And I personally think they should have the right to be in their children’s lives as much as an adoptive parent would, if they didn’t know that they even had a child...yeah I’m sorry, had to get that out there. Okay, on the story so far. I love your writing style and character portrayal.

Ok so I'm gonna make a guess and hope desperately in wrong but both Ginny and Albus wanted them split so what is... Albums Polyjuiced himself as Draco and Lily Molly is ... his.*shudders*

Thanks, I so enjoyed this amazing story.

love it please write more

UGH, you got them back together too quickly. Come on you had a chance to make it believable. Harry abandoned Draco, and never once gave him a chance to even defend himself, or at least know his children. Harry was the most selfish twat possible. His family just as bad, if not worse, considering how some were supposed to be Draco's family. Harry got to move on and have a happy life. Honestly, Harry just looks like a massive selfish jerk. Not to mention, I'm sure there are some pureblood laws on the books about heir stealing, which is what they did.

Amazing story, i love and how it end's also

it's too stupid to live kind of story. sorry i cant finish it or it'll make me stupid to.

Wonderfully cute story

Keep writing as life allows