Well. I'm calmer now. Let me just say if the intent of this story was to have your reader screaming incoherently at her computer, then, well played … well played. I was. Sitting here, ridiculously screaming at my computer while biting my fingernails down to little chips as the time clicked away during this ULCEROUS story! Tension filled, ulcerous, amazingly written, incredible, tremendous story!

YES! GO RAPH! NOW CUT THAT BASTARD"S HEAD OFF!

YES! THANK YOU, JESUS!

AAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH!

Oh my God! Oh my God! OH MY GOD!

This buried alive challenge was amazing! Once again, nothing is resolved until right at the end. Suspense overload! Seriously, this is going into one of my favorites. Definitely the kind of thriller I was hoping for when I read the description! This was so very well written, I literally started this story and could not put it down! Excellent, excellent, excellent!

I am just getting back into turtle stories and i am loving the Leo-Centric Ones. Thanks for making this one...

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EEEH! *punches air in excitement* So I was definitely grinning ear to ear as I skipped down the steps to the kitchen to get a glass of juice. It's 3 in the morning. THIS is why people think I'm weird. lol. YEY! Leo survived! I am SO excited now! I hope I can actually get back to sleep! Ok. Serious review time.

I think I really simply liked just the idea of it. Leo being incarcerated in a metal tomb, six feet under with his brothers scrambling to find him. I love Leo and I love Leo being hurt in any way shape or form even more. So all this? Icing on the cake. On a lighter note one thinks that perhaps Leo would have remembered to mention that the Shedder said an 'abandoned' cementary from the get go. lol. But then of course one would be missing 6 chapters. lol. The details were great though lacking in certain spots. The depth of the characters hit the right notes each time. There was a bit OOC-ness from Mikey occasionally but not to a point where it couldn't be overlooked. Overall, great story and it's sure to go into my favorites.

Now if you'll excuse me...I'm going to go squeal one more time before climbing off to bed. Great story. :D :D

I was on the edge of my seat as I read this. I'm glad things turned out alright in the end. And seeing Raph showing his caring side was heartwarming as well. I think you managed to capture the personalities of the characters well here. Nicely done. _

OMG. Let's just say you are lucky to be alive right now. If you had killed Leo, you would be dead.

He is my fav turtle! Killing him would make me leave my nice warm bed, locate you using my awesome ninja skills, and then having to assissinate you for revenge. So yeah, your a lucky person.

Great job on the story I liked it alot, keep up the good work.

Yes... Leo made it home and alive! They are all safe- at least for now *looks around nervously* Very god story. Thanks for the awesome ride! :)

Now, this, dear one, was a stunning fiction. Wonderful job of balancing the suspense with Leo's agony. And kudos for making the ending both realistic and happy. Loved it.

The tension in this was out of this world, I'm so glad I read it all in one go because I don't think I could cope with waiting between chapters!

Adored Raph at the end being so freaking adorable in the protective carer brother phase, and I love how in-charecter and believeable you kept everyone throughout _

THat was a wonderful Story Wolf, I love that ending quote also and I loved how you made Raph, in the last three or so chapters, more of a leader XD

I love the stipulation that you applied xD 60 minutes to live and 3 brilliant

saiyura, the bunny's rule all!