Reviews for Broken Soul |
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![]() ![]() your story was amazing to read! I wish it didn't end though... it's so cute and cool and awesome and you're such a great writer! The words you use are nice to read and it's just, amazing. I haven't seen grammar mistakes either. I really hope you keep writing forever! |
![]() ![]() ![]() QWQ Hiabri-chan but... REALLY GREAT! nwn |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! KAKOI DESU! w |
![]() ![]() ![]() / KYAAA KAWAII DESU! Arigatou owo/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() o 100TYL18 KAKOI DESU! Arigatou owo/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAYYYYYY! :D This story was awesome! I like the BDSM in this story... Like how Byakuran brainwashed Hibari... But I wished it wasn't him! :( But never mind, this was a good read! But it somehow reminded me of a similar brainwashing 6918 story :D -TheLemonGoddess |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was..amazing -/- |
![]() ![]() ![]() w; now I wonder how come I searched for this pairing, what should I do? I'm addicted,,, I love 6918 but lately I want something spicy so I tried to find 10018, not really hoping since it's like ultra-rare pairing, then I found your story then I read it in one go then I regret it when the end comes then I goes I NEED MOAR! you even end it with 6918 heavenly delicious dunno why but I love it when some sadistic seme break my beloved uke,,, am I a sadist? Well, I need more, this kind of story definitely my favorite, great story I really do hope you prolonged Hiba-chan torture scene though *smile innocently* have a great days since you just brighten my life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lol Hibari is so tsundere XD I love how it all merged with the canon story perfectly. And nice TYL!1827 :3 I am glad it all ended with a happy ending, Broken!Hibari is heartbreaking :'( Thanks for the wonderful story, and Happy Lunar New Year~! |
![]() ![]() I wouldn't never knew'd, that I would be fan of 10018. But now I know. This fanfiction was nice to read. It did have a great story, and it sounded like that it would be come from real manga. Great story! 5 stars! I loved it! |
![]() ![]() Oh~! It's now 1001869 (maybe 27 also)! Hibari is so popular~! Thank you for the update, please update more :* |
![]() ![]() Thank you for adding 6918 here! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon :)) |
![]() ![]() Yes. Good job. I' d love to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() and despite hibari being like that, i find it cute, coz it's something u don't see very often |