| Reviews for One Step Further |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2019 Japanese having big dicks? LMAO GOOD JOKE NIGGGA |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/20/2018 Good job it’s good |
 DARKDEATH98 chapter 1 . 7/10/2018 I like this story. The way Siesta talked was funny, even if it was completely OOC for her. Louise has always been my favorite tsundere so seeing her be a little more loving with Saito was nice. Good work... |
| tianakiana chapter 1 . 2/16/2018 This was really sweet and cute, and exactly how I would have written their first time. I know we don't grade it but if this was getting graded, it'd be an A! Favoriting this |
| Ami chapter 1 . 1/26/2017 C un citron tre bien adoré j'ai adoré |
| Animebinge chapter 1 . 5/25/2016 one of the best lemons ive seen so far on this site |
| Katrina chapter 1 . 1/6/2016 Thank you so much! I don't like Siesta so this fanfic was awesome for me! |
| marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 1 . 9/18/2015 it was ok 60/100 |
| Reg chapter 1 . 1/18/2015 It was the best! Great narrating skills! Please post more adressing different circumstances! Multiple thumbs up! |
| marcusedwards411 chapter 1 . 9/6/2014 cmon you can do better its good 7/10 more chapters |
| XXXXX chapter 1 . 5/28/2014 The best story I've ever read. Write more Saito Louise lemon! |
| Mrs Hikaru Hitachiin chapter 1 . 8/3/2013 Wait...awesome story but wtf did she sleep with his dick inside of her still or something? O.O |
| Hanabi's Biggest Fan chapter 1 . 2/5/2013 Excellent first effort. I'm especially pleased with the way you got some plot out of the way up front, then took the whole rest of the short chapter to write the lemon. An excellent strategy, to be sure, but... I do have more to add, but I'd prefer to do it via PM. Let me know if you'd like to hear more of my comments. |
| cybercorpsesnake chapter 1 . 11/17/2012 Good first lemon |
| emily chapter 1 . 8/9/2012 i think its great! good job! |
