I want more pleeeaase

second chapter plzzzz...

That was hella freaking creepy oh my god just ahhhhh. It was so well written too! Just ugh I've got the creeps now. Stupid Ayanami. Pfft thanks that was really awesome to read.

Shhhh

wahhhhhh more please... tease teito until he lust for his touch heheheee

I really like if you continue~~~ XD

Ooo I like this. I can see it becoming a really good story if you would continue it.

Holy shit that was very creepy but cool at the same time! But i think that maybe you should add more or write another story with these two as the pair b/c we need more of them.

Does this mean that Hakuren was possessed or something by Ayanami? Or is it just me trying to make it out as something more than it is? XD

I really liked how you've made Teito deny it and think that he injured himself while sleeping. (Cutting yourself on the cheek? I think that's really hard to do when you're asleep... on your bed... xD)

I wonder what happens after this... Some sadistic side of me wonders why Ayanami is doing this and if Teito would really "learn to crave him." ...(I just shivered when I wrote that.)

Ohhhh... I LOVE YOU! Sooo cooooll. By the way I also reading your fic at 2 in the morning. Not joking really (and it's the 1 time too). I really like it cause I can see it happen. Ayanami hunting Teito in his dreams and Teito in denial of the whole thing.

Do you plan to write a equel, it would blast! Ayanami and Teito face-to-face, while doing thing like this! That's almost sends shiver down my spine (of escitment to read even if such story hasn't been writen thus far)

Hope you muse keep you inspired

Kiss Kiss

AM001

Asdf. I'm scared to death.

mnnmnmnmn i am entertaining the thought of ayanami possessing anyone close to teito . frau? Hakuren *O*... i wish the anime shows the second season sooon T_T 07 ghost was awsm.

This is fricking brilliant!

Creepy, indeed, but at the same time brilliant _

How about a sequel? I'd love to read more!

It's 1am here and I was honestly cringing into my pillow for most of this story. So ...so... disturbing? Creepy? Eerie? Hm but just soo good! Wonderful imagery throughout the "dream" sequence. And then the last sentence... *cringes* once again, just so chilling.
Ah that's gonna take a while to get out of my mind... not that I want it gone just... gah! Hakuren!