Intense story where I thought Ichigo would be the prey. Nicely written

Maybe I can't but... Please! Can I translate it into Russian?

You did well! Definitely satisfied my horror and gore crave, shhh, I never said that. ;)

Wow. So brutal. Hahaha. Grimm and Ichi makes a good partners in crime.

Talk bout a sadistic motha fucka...no offense ta ur story, i lik it :D

I'm not sure I should like this story but I so ._. Dear Penny, it seems you now have me hooked on Guro. This is probably going to be bad for my health x3

Whoa...that was something very interesting at first I thought it be rape then go for a Guro feeling to it or you would make it seem like the movie hostel I was kinda expecting something like that but boy did you prove me wrong lol but that was kinda hot especially seeing a much darker side of ichigo :)

Creepy but good

I'm glad that you explained what Hoshoku meant, though admittedly I would have enjoyed it more if I'd have known from the beginning instead of trying to figure it out as I read it. The only real complaint I could think of was the lack of explanation, preferably in the beginning, about what 'Guro' meant. Other than that I thought this was an incredible psychological piece; great job on it.

ok that was seriously fudged up...but i luved it~!

Oooh, dark, twisted, disgusting, all some very good themes. And I think that was probably one of the weirder kinks I've read about. Good job!

The only thing I liked about this was the mystery of who was who - which was done well. I didn't care for the rest of it.

Alright even if I love the 69 review I have to make it 70 love this!

omg...that was wicked!n sick...but hey you gotta love it..;D

Oooh~! Lovely lovely~! :D