Absolutely superb. It really captures the feel of good Halo literature, very reminiscent of Eric Nylund's work, every detail is crisp, excellent, and just plain perfect. This fan fiction does what most can't. 5/5

Interesting chapter, didn't know Jace and Alex had history. Keep up your good writing!

Yet another good chapter, and more convincing Covenant behavior. There were, though, far more spelling errors than usual, I think. You need to review the chapters more carefully for mistakes before you post them. A few of the mistakes SpellCheck should have caught, too. Be more careful.

You have really nailed the feel of the Covenant in this now. The change is literally black and white, night and day, Nurgle and Slaanesh, between when you started and now. This is really starting to reach the quality of 343-sponsored content. Keep up the great work, and try to update regularly!

Awesome, the ship scene is exciting and well written. I like seeing from Asari's POV, she's cool and collected compared to Erikson. I hope the Novas make it out alive

lovely, i enjoyed this alot and our story, its well written and i like how you express each charaters feelings.

keep up teh good work.

Maxim and Knight

I only read the first chapter but it was actually quite entertaining. Only criticism is that I strongly suggest you remove phrases like ”he threw the plasma grenade on the elite's armor, so that it stuck.” This so that it stuck is unnecessary as everyone reading is a halo fan and knows that stickies stick eh? Anyway, keep up the good work and I'll see you planetside :)

nice chapte and well worth the wait, cant wait to see what happens next.

are you accepting oc's?

Maxim and Knight

hmmm intresting i like your story, a few missing words here and there but otherwise a good read.

keep up teh good work.

Maxim and Knight

THis was great, good to have you back. EMD's are a great idea, just remember that instead of rubber bullets UNSC uses TTRs (Tactical Training Rounds).

Helllooooo, tis me, a fan of your story. I am alive.

And I am glad to see this story is still going, I am loving how this is shaping up, heh. Jace in command... I wonder how that will sit with the other two Headhunters sides Alex in the future.

Anyways, your story is, as always, superb! I look forward to reading the next chapter, till then, keep up the good work.

Much win good sir.

Good work towards making the Covenant a believable and dangerous enemy. Nice chapter.

No Nanocrystal layer in SPI armor, i only say this because its incredibly cheaper the MJOLNIR armor. You make no mention of this sort of upgrade either. Its a fantastic read, though a lil over top.

This was one of my favorite chapters actually, I enjoyed the character development and some conversations like the one in the elevator ride were perfect