| Reviews for A Story To Tell |
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   Breyito chapter 15 . 10/24/2013 Okay, this chapter was very original, but if you dont mind, I will correct the sentences (Google traductor is not a very good source, believe me) I'm Argentinian, so I cant let this great work be ruined because of spanish. Let's see: -¿Porqué continuas siguiéndome? -¿Te gusto o algo? -¿Quieres que te bese? -¿Estaba en lo correcto, Gilbert? ¿Te gusto? ¿Quieres que te bese? -¿Quieres que haga más? -Eres realmente sumiso, ¿sabias eso, Jeremy? -Si hubiera sabido que el sexo te callaría, hubiera intentado esto hace meses. -¿Quieres tener sexo conmigo? - In spanish, unless you are talking to some authority, you almost never say the word 'usted' I mean, you. And, if you are talking to an equal, you said 'tu' or 'vos' depends on the country (in Spain its the 'tu' and in my country 'vos'). Anyway, very cute and hot (;P) chapter. Kiss! |
| cole el diabolos chapter 29 . 3/24/2011 So I read all the one shots of this collection and i like them all. Sorry that i didnt review every fiction, but i can't wait to read the next and the next and the next... So I'm writing here and say thx for updating and writing. I like it very much. Can I write you a story wish? When you've got enough ideas ignor me |
| asm613 chapter 25 . 1/11/2011 "You know what you were saying this morning?" Jeremy nodded his head, he also remembered chanting 'Me, Me, ME!' in his head over and over again, - This part was very funny. Nice story telling. Thanks for sharing. |
| csifan1 chapter 22 . 1/6/2011 Really liked this you do a bunch of these,but with Damon and are quite thoughtful but I am just not into werewolves as I am into vampires. |
| fire dragonheart chapter 29 . 12/24/2010 Nice |
| Ghostwriter chapter 29 . 12/20/2010 Great job. More soon please. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| Forevertheshipper chapter 29 . 12/18/2010 loving this story :) plz update soon |
| primavera15 chapter 29 . 12/17/2010 oh my god i got confused for a second! XD i thought it was a good idea for you to do the same version for both of these! they are both great couples! thankies! |
| MysticalKC chapter 29 . 12/17/2010 Loved It! :D |
| primavera15 chapter 28 . 12/13/2010 sorry damon! though you don't know what you missed :) jeremy rocks! thanks for another wonderful chappie! |
| Toulip Fontana chapter 27 . 12/12/2010 Oh my gosh, how sad! That ending was so emotional- but I loved it! :) :) |
| fire dragonheart chapter 28 . 12/12/2010 nice |
| Ghostwriter chapter 28 . 12/12/2010 Nicely done. I love it. More soon please. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| MysticalKC chapter 28 . 12/12/2010 I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! IT IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I WANNA READ MORE! :D |
| Vesuvious chapter 16 . 12/12/2010 Laughed my ass off when Aunt Jenna piped in at the end. |
