| Reviews for Magma and Hurricane |
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   Wierdo Boi chapter 10 . 4/6 Very good stuff in general. Love the story and the chemistry between Burter and Jeice. The descriptions are top-notch and the dialogue feels natural. If I were to have one complaint, I'm a but miffed on Recoome's character, I know you're adapting the English Dub Recoome but I don't really like that Recoome. Maybe if you found some way to rework him a bit, I'd love this story 100%. But for now, I only like this story 99%. Ginyu Force Out! |
| Lance Curry chapter 10 . 10/5/2016 ...Oh my God, Zangya just hugged Frieza and called him cute. |
| Lance Curry chapter 9 . 10/5/2016 Dang, Recoome's slow! Anyway, funny. I wonder if Ginyu will accept... |
| Lance Curry chapter 8 . 10/5/2016 "... BURRITOS?!" |
| Lance Curry chapter 7 . 10/5/2016 So Bojack never kills Zangya... WOO-HOO! |
| Lance Curry chapter 6 . 10/5/2016 Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! I loved how Kogu reacted to the Ginyu Force poses. "What... the hell just happened?" |
| Lance Curry chapter 5 . 10/5/2016 Nice history lesson on the Ginyu Force. So that's how Recoome, Burter, and Jeice joined the force. |
| Lance Curry chapter 4 . 10/5/2016 OK, this is before Namek. OK. Funny with Recoome's spitball. |
| Lance Curry chapter 3 . 10/4/2016 IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAAAAAAAAAAAAND! |
| Lance Curry chapter 2 . 10/4/2016 Oh, God. Exploding microwaves and burritos... |
| Lance Curry chapter 1 . 10/4/2016 Where did Guldo get killed? Was this on Namek assuming Recoome killed Gohan, Krillin, and Vegeta? |
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/18/2016 Please add more chapters to this story and soon of it isn't a problem with you that is |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/9/2016 Please add more than 10 chapters and please make it happen fast |
| RWBY Kuran chapter 10 . 12/29/2015 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE put up more chapters for this story and ASAP please |
| friezablast chapter 10 . 1/7/2014 Zangya hugging Frieza Frieza enjoying having his face in a womans breasts death from laughter. Srsly I know this is late but... PLEASE update! Im dying to see Friezas reaction. |
