Reviews for Magma and Hurricane
Wierdo Boi chapter 10 . 4/6
Very good stuff in general. Love the story and the chemistry between Burter and Jeice. The descriptions are top-notch and the dialogue feels natural. If I were to have one complaint, I'm a but miffed on Recoome's character, I know you're adapting the English Dub Recoome but I don't really like that Recoome. Maybe if you found some way to rework him a bit, I'd love this story 100%. But for now, I only like this story 99%. Ginyu Force Out!
Lance Curry chapter 10 . 10/5/2016
...Oh my God, Zangya just hugged Frieza and called him cute.
Lance Curry chapter 9 . 10/5/2016
Dang, Recoome's slow! Anyway, funny. I wonder if Ginyu will accept...
Lance Curry chapter 8 . 10/5/2016
"... BURRITOS?!"
Lance Curry chapter 7 . 10/5/2016
So Bojack never kills Zangya... WOO-HOO!
Lance Curry chapter 6 . 10/5/2016
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! I loved how Kogu reacted to the Ginyu Force poses.

"What... the hell just happened?"
Lance Curry chapter 5 . 10/5/2016
Nice history lesson on the Ginyu Force. So that's how Recoome, Burter, and Jeice joined the force.
Lance Curry chapter 4 . 10/5/2016
OK, this is before Namek. OK. Funny with Recoome's spitball.
Lance Curry chapter 3 . 10/4/2016
IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAAAAAAAAAAAAND!
Lance Curry chapter 2 . 10/4/2016
Oh, God. Exploding microwaves and burritos...
Lance Curry chapter 1 . 10/4/2016
Where did Guldo get killed? Was this on Namek assuming Recoome killed Gohan, Krillin, and Vegeta?
Guest chapter 10 . 1/18/2016
Please add more chapters to this story and soon of it isn't a problem with you that is
Guest chapter 1 . 1/9/2016
Please add more than 10 chapters and please make it happen fast
RWBY Kuran chapter 10 . 12/29/2015
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE put up more chapters for this story and ASAP please
friezablast chapter 10 . 1/7/2014
Zangya hugging Frieza Frieza enjoying having his face in a womans breasts death from laughter. Srsly I know this is late but... PLEASE update! Im dying to see Friezas reaction.
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