I'm blind so when I listened to that story I felt great sympathy for Ryan because I was blinded at 13 years old and it was and still is very scary. Also I think the way you write is very interesting (in a good way) and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
P.S I typed this using voice recognition software so sorry if some of the words are wrong!

So sweet.
"...Shut up. I'm trying to wallow in my guilt, and you're not helping."
I loved that part.
These two. I don't even know how it started. But I'm hooked.

I loved this so much! You wrote them in-character to the point. Great job! I really enjoyed reading this:)

I personally would have like a little more Ryan and Esposito but it was still really good. Nice job.

owwww...that was good making Castle wait it out...and yes ) the whole Kevin and Javier hook up heheheh..great story!thank you

yes CLAMP is very much to blame for the sight related kinks (and many many yaoi fans aswel) good story

-Sel

I am officially a fan of this pairing.

Story faved.

LOL Great ending. Very nice one shot.

Very well done, thanks!

Adoreable! Loved it! I don't care what Jon & Seamus said at comic con, these two are just too adoreable for words! Well done :)