Need a sequel

Thus makes me want to cry. I'm gonna take a hot shower and cry now...

Damn, the entire time I was really hoping for Pepper to tell Tony to leave Amanda but I doubt he would have done it.

Not really understanding what was the point of writing this story. It kind of SUCKED!

WOOOOOW! this is s ! \m/
i really LOVE IT! how I wish you could write a part 2, you know? like, they see each other again after 5 years then pepper moved on and settled with her husband with their SON and TONY DIVORCED with his wife because he does not LOVE HER IN THE FIRST PLACE then TONY cannot move on to pepper but he did not go back to his old lifestyle being a playboy because he is waiting for pepper but when he finally saw her she's happy with her life now but in the ending pepper STILL in love with tony and tony is the REAL FATHER of pepper's son. JUST LIKE THAT! i hope you can make it !
i love yo H!

owww muy bueno el fic, pero me hubiera gustado que se quedaran juntos, debes de hacer una continuación de la pronto¡

Great story! Such characterization! I'd love to read a part 2 if ever there is one! I was really routing for Tony and Pepper to get together! :)

Awww is it really over? Loved this fic, please continue!

This story was fascinating! The characterization was perfect, which is scary considering that we would then have to consider that this sort of situation could happen.
If you were to post a sequel, I actually wouldn't mind if Tony and Pepper never got together. If it simply focused on Pepper building a new life for herself, I think it would really do justice for her character. As it is, the ending is a bit saddening but also very powerful.
Thanks for a great story!

Awesome! Please update! This is fantastic.

I really really like it! i kinda don't like the ending i thought they have chance to be happily ever after, but as I said i really like it tough.
i hope there's a sequel. i hope you update soon.
i really like your STORIES! ]

That is wonderful! Please, don't stop! Continue this! )))))
I don't like Amanda! She should live! Pepperony forever!

ugggghh

I was so stupid to go into the angst section

please tell me there's gonna be a sequel or something

I really wish the story doesn't end like this :(

Well, this was , even. I say it was perfect because, like a puzzle, all the pieces fit. You were constant: Stark's marriage came out of nowhere, the beginning of the affair was a bit of a surprise (for what it's worth) and the way that Pepper left was totally out of the blue. You act first and explain later and that's somehow thematically significant. Like I said; perfect. I don't have any complaints, about anything. I don't think you need to continue this because it is what it is. It's done and it was done well.(in terms of writing and story structure) I saw a couple errors but they're mainly housekeeping. On the artistic front; you are all systems go. Just in terms of character portrayal, be careful with your depictions of the characters. I mean, this is certainly your story and you have creative license and it is refreshing to see 'Pepperony' deconstructed. But, the Tony that resulted from this was borderline abusive/obsessive at points. I'm not saying that this is a bad thing, or something that you should avoid. It's just a common fanfiction trope for evil characters and while a useful device; not something that you should fall back on. So, use it, but be careful that you don't OVERuse it. Other than that; I love you so much for writing this. It's absolutely amazing. It takes a brave author to dismantle the beloved 'happy ending'. For that, I have immense respect for you, which is magnified by the style of your writing, which I can't describe but I can say, enhanced the story. I really hope that you continue doing what you're doing because it's, almost, kinda, revolutionary.