awwwwwwwwwwwwww

i love this fan fiction. I thought it was hilarious when everyone couldn't tell rini and ranma apart. ryouga and rini are the cutest couple throughout this entire story.

love it!

love it please continue the story soon!

this is really good! one thing, whenever Rini met someone shi would say "ni hao!" which is actually hello in madrin not japanese, for all i know you could have done this on purpose but just yo let you know, I japan you would say "Ohayo Gozaimasu" in the morning, "Konnichi wa" in the afternoon, and "Komban wa" in the evening, or sometimes they ay just "ohayo"

is tht it? PLZ TELL ME THERE'S MORE!

Uh... were to start. Rini was a little... 2 dimensional for my tastes and she was pretty much over powered. She didn't have any struggle and any faults, which can turn someone away from actually liking her. Overall... I'd have to give this, a C-.

It had some perks that caught my eyes, but really those didn't give you enough to save the story from me disliking it a bit. There was so much more you could have done.

Anywho, you'll probably get better if you keep at it.