Would have been hot (well, hotter) if you used the lube that heats up on skin contact.

I feel like you could have left the Japanese part out but I still like the story I guess.

Hbcx

so denzel is vampire too?

I couldn't even make it past this chapter. This is homophobic, transphobic, transmysoginistic, and slut shaming. I actually got sick reading this. Maybe next time you should check what you write. There is so much that is problematic about this. It's gross.

LOL, so the canon FF7 events happened sometime between the Empress-Cloud-and-Prince-Sephiroth-events and this fic?

WAY TO GO YUFFIE! Got to hear some naughty Seph/Cloud, HELL YES!

Where I went there were 8 periods, and seniors could have early dismissal if they wanted. 5, 6, 7 periods were lunch periods and seniors and a small court outside where they could sit for lunch. There was an A, B, C, D, and E day (yes one for each day of the week, so that if we had off a couple of day, then the first day back would be have the schedule of the day we would have had first without the break [e.g. if school was out for two days and the first day would have been a B day without the break, then the next day back would be a B day instead of a D day]). Phys Ed and Science are double periods with Phys Ed on two of the days and Science the other days (unless you were a senior with no science class. Then you would have Phys Ed for only one period every day). English and Phys Ed are required for all 4 years. Science and History are only needed for the first three years. Math was required for two years. The remaining periods are taken up by electives. There are two types of electives (most of which only took up one semester [half a year]) and you needed to take a full years worth of each. One type covered art (drawing, drama, photography, etc.) and another was more busnessy (e.g. robotics, shop, programing, etc.)

Such an awesome, sexy, epic story :D I love how you've written it and the plot is cool, if a little inconsistent, but to be perfectly honest, the lemon does a very good job of distracting from that XD

I loved the twist at the end! Totally out of no where!

I really enjoyed this fic.

It was a good work D

well well well what a good story very nice

*next to Yuffie* Yea, Yuffie, why? *plugs nose with tissues* Ahem! Anyway, so not happy to see this end! I do hope you follow up with oneshots of the others. And then a reunion with everyone and they have a sleepover. Mmm... Uh! Yea. Bye! _

Nice ending! I want more though...

I loled at the Yuffie part.

So I basically read this all in one go and must say that I'm very impressed with this story. It has such great aspects like integrading the characters into modern society. The plot is quite brilliant but I feel like you rushed through some points just to get it over with. The pacing also seems a bit fast for my taste, partcularly with meeeting Sephiroth's parents, the incidents where Angeal, Zack, and Genesis are turned into vampires, and when Kadaj and Reeves feels and displayed. I don't know if this was intended but I think you could really expand on these points. Beisdes that I thought it was a great way of delivering an interesting story.

~L. Dirge