if the pilgrim is a bird
merlin is a bird
pilgrim can command ? dragon
merlin can command dragon
drqgoon has a beard
pilgrim has a beard
Ergo Pilgrin is a futur version of 16centuries merlin who came back in the past.
But I hope it's wrong because merlin and arthur are kind of Choosen ones ? And the way he talk about them...

Very dramatic opening!

Wow! That's quite an ending. Some chapters back, even before you made the revelation, I guessed the Pilgrim to be Merlin's future self. But seeing it proven even till the end, I still marvel at the genius behind your work. This is an amazing read. In the beginning, it started off simple. Then, the Pilgrim came in and things got a little complicated. More complications rose up when Morgana had to do that incestuous conception of her evil, magical child. The songs of prophecy were brilliant. You interpreted them well, letting them fulfill in interesting ways. Though there were parts I frowned at and a few things got me confused, I felt enthralled by this story. You have a great talent (even though this is a fanfic) and it shines through.

So... Merlin is going to take care of Harry Potter and Bruce Wayne. That's good to know. No wonder Batman hardly ever leaves a battle dying in spite of him being a hero with no superpowers. Merlin's magic has been protecting him. It must be his secret.

This is far more poignant, more fitting than what we got on 'Diamond of the Day - Part 2'. I always thought that Merlin loved Morgana as more than a friend even though he rarely had time to express it (except for bringing her flowers). Her death has to cut into his heart, especially when it's by his hand. This was a deeply moving chapter. The way you portrayed how far gone Morgana is, evokes sadness and pity. It's hard to hate her. She was just a broken, twisted woman with misled convictions and darkened morals.

This is a powerful chapter. The birth of a legend. Emrys and the Once and Future King. I have never seen a story that puts quite as moving as you've done. You have an incredible talent. Now, the song of prophecy has been explained and come to pass.
Uther is a coward for ending his own life before seeking his son's forgiveness. Shame on him.

Very deep, very intense. That last part, though, I nearly cried there.
And poor Arthur. Having to discover that the father he loves is evil and deserves to die.

Wow! Incredible chapter! Doctor Who! And Aslan! I like your mix of mythologies and fictional legends. It makes your story unique and refreshing.

Seriously, though, with all his power, Merlin stupidly let's bad things happen to him or around him.

That's damn creepy. And really dark.

Wow! That was magnificent. Now, I understand who Pilgrim is. I haven't watched Doctor Who, but I guess he's a version of The Doctor in this story?
Too bad Morgana chose the path of darkness. I pity her and what she's become.

"...seen the face of God"? OK, I don't know what religion you practise but I find it strange when you mention God in your fic as the one these fictional characters serve, esp since no one has seen God except His angels and dead saints. I know that the deities served or acknowledged in 'Merlin' are the gods and the Triple Goddess. At least, use something canon, and don't sound blasphemous. Thank you.
Interesting story, by the way.

pilgrim is merlin .he matches the descriptions and i have heard once that merlin leaves backwards somehow.

Oh my gosh, it was Gandalf! Wasn't there a reference to Godric Gryffindor earlier, too?

I'm pretty sure pilgrim just implied he was Merlin in a sense

I'm really enjoying this story, thanks!