i love this so much. thank you for sharing! i cried over the epilogue

I really loved this story, I couldn't put it down! It was extremely well written and the story line was captivating.
Thank you for writing it and all your other amazing stories.

Great story! I just want to know what Felix’s fate was. You didn’t mention his sentencing. I like to think he got life in prison. Great job though!

Great storyI've reread this several times.

I hate the Emmett you've written. I don't mind how you've written him, I just hate who he is as an (imaginary) person. He's a 5 year old in a grown man's body. Everything has to be about him and what he thinks is best, no matter what Bella thinks or wants. It's been that way since they were reunited and it's still that way with Betty. Ugh.

I'm scared for what Bella must have gone through and what she will face.

I love Esme too!

I cannot imagine writing a story like this with so much thought put into it to bring so much emotion into me with pity for what this child went through for so many years and survived. All I can say is Good Writing and thank you for your time.

I honestly don’t like several PoV’s but I’m trying here

X-ray techs are not technicians .. They are radiologic Technologist . Technitions do nails...or repair equipment.. Also a chest X-ray is a common routine exam done daily as a walk in.. Appointments are never scheduled for chest X-rays .. Heart procedures such as echocardiogram are not done in Radiology . That is a heart procedure that would be done by a cardiologist or in the ER. Sorry I am an X-ray Technoligist I had to clear up those mistakes..

Have Doctor Denali and Carmen met?

I have read and reread this story so many times and I’ve never gotten bored of it... I love the way you have written this story hope you continue to write many many more as you are a fantastic writer.
If anyone says anything different please ignore them they are just jealous.

I realize it has been a long time since this story ended but I want to put forth my gratitude. This story made me tear up at points. There were characters I loved like Esme and Rose throughout the story and there were characters who annoyed me at times and who I loved at times like Alice Emmet and a guy who was an unsung hero in Jasper. I know you wanted a romance angle with Edward but it would be impossible to see him as a guy who took advantage of a sexually, physical and emotionally traumatized girl with a fifth grade education to have a girlfriend. I usually like Edward but not I was glad he didn’t play too much of a role. That’s the mark of a great story. You made me emotionally invested in these characters whether it was to love them or hate them. There was not one character I didn’t have a strong opinion about whether it was good or bad. That doesn’t happen to me often so thank you for that. An outstanding job and one story I will reread often.

Ugh. Maybe it’s because I’m a dad with two daughters that makes me so angry that Edward keeps trying to pick up a traumatized girl who just had a heart transplant. Please don’t get me wrong this is a wonderful story. My dislike for him means I am emotionally involved and that doesn’t happen often when I read which is a testament to your skill.

Good chapter but it’s still hard for me to like Edward. Still feels like he is trying to pick up a traumatized girl who relies on him for just friendship. Emmet was an ass but I at least understand him a bit.