Oh its good pls do more thanx

Zuko gave up looking for Jin after only a night, and decided to go with Sokka instead of continuing? Hmm ok.

Anyway, nice story. Very creative :)

Nice story so far. Character dialogue is a bit off sometimes but I LOVE the stuff you did with the imprisonment of Jin.

Oh and "No, I think Zuko took care of most of them and the rest are...'' Toph just uses ''Zuko'' when talking to Jin. Just sayin.

Hey when are you going to update? :\

this has been a great story so far can't wait for new chapter

awesome fanfic :)

Finally decided to review this story again. In my opinion Jin forgave Zuko a bit too much, and too quick. She strikes means the kind of girl who'd accept a guys apology and forgive him but still carry a bit of anger. Not much, just enough to make him work hard to make it up to her in this kinda situation.

As an example pertaining to my RL GF, spending the day with her doing when she was sick, feeding her lunch and dinner, and run to the nearest mall(3.5 miles, and I didn't have a license 9 moths ago in February) to buy her a candy chocolate rabbit. Litteraly, it wS

as a caramel filled milk chocolate rabbit, the same size as a live one. I swear, there were moments when I irrationally thought she was pregnant. Then I remembered we we sixteen, seventeen in 2 months me, and seventeen for her then. That and we both haven't, umm well...Yet.

I'll give anyone three guesses what it was that I had to apoligize, and do everything I did for her to forgive me the same level as Jin did Zuko. No one will ever get it.

Finally got a chance to read this. It's really amazing how much better this new version looks.

I like how you ended up writing Jin in, and how everyone disagreed with Zuko about letting her come. Your fight scene came out really nice too.

I'd say more, but i'm still kinda out of it.

Great chapter and update soon!

:)

aww she's not a waterbender

So ends the Third Elemental War, Sozin's War, the Centennial War and so on. Great chapter Wiki, keep it up. ~GraysonPaladin,For Jinko's Honor and Toko's Strength I will Fight

so, I met to review this sooner, like, when you first posted this, but...apparently I got distracted by my characters, and ways to make their life's miserable(gee, that makes me sound like a bad person).

I honestly don't think this chapter is as bad as you think it is. It just kinda looks that way, due it being short, and some of it being taken from the show.

I loved the reunion between Zuko and Jin though.

Ah... so many happy reunions and Zuko not being a ass anymore. Great chapter Wiki ~GraysonPalaldin, By Jinko's Honor and Toko's Strength I will Fight

Great chapter ... Please update soon!

:)

YAY for Chapter! Now I'll keep my end of the bargain, and actually finish my Chapter 4 soon-ish. Even though we spent way too much arguing over our fics, and how bad/good they were.

XD. I see you named the chapter after the negotiations we were talking so much about.

I definitely see why you wanted to keep that Iroh scene. That was just...really good and well-executed, and added a nice touch to that fic.

uh...what else? I like some of the other little details here like Aang's measly flame, and Jin's reasonable assumption that the Avatar would be an adult(which is reasonable, since she only recently found out about the war, so she wouldn't be expected to know that).

I better shut up now, and actually get back to writing.