Good story

You were wonderful at this I really liked it

OMG, this is the most precious-I Don't even, why are Hunters so freakin' cute?!Gahhhh!

The development between Ellis and the Hunter's adorable! The part where Ellis tried to rush and scared off our little HUnter-chan, oh I was absolutely gushing and then the slow, touches the following nights! Aghhhh!

TBH, during the smut, I was cooing like "Hunter its 'll be fine now let him use yyou and abuse you" XD

Oh my. This was deliciously good.

I'd love to see this in canon.

Hunter slash FTW! Haha

I loved it it was so delicious and steam my but you also had the fantastic development for feelings and plot. I just wished you could have written another chapter

OH MY GAWD I LOVE U

I loved this completely. From the strong charactor development to the seamy yet gental intamacy, it left me wanting more. ;)

I loved it so much. I want a Hunter :3

FAN!

I've read a lot of erotic literature in my time, much of it professional. I have to say that you did an amazing job here, it was just as good, if not better, than much of the professional erotic fiction I've read. You're awesome. Make live to me.

Damn that was really hot! I can't believe Ellis just dominated the hunter / heh that was awesome love it

Awasome :D

I loved it! I let out a giant *AWWWWWWW3* in the middle of class

Wow. Just wow. This was honestly the best written fanfiction I have read yet. Defenantly on my top five list of authors. the descriptions were perfect. Never once did the flow of the story waver or get inturrupted. The length of the story was very satisfying along with the events that happened between the couple. I really wished that I could send u much longer review but I am in my iPod and touch screens and I don't get along very well.

One more thing. The behavior of the hunter was perfect. Most people ruin the image of he hunter and rush into the intimacy of the couple.

Tah tah!