It was a little weird when did Chess have a brother or sister I wanner meet more of his family

So CUTE!

Well, you seem to have officially put them together. Where are you taking them next, I wonder? I'll be interested to see...

heehee, wouldn't have thought chess and mally as a couple, but very sweet :D x

Aww that ending was so cute ]

THAT WAS SICK! IM SO HAPPY THAT YOU WROTE THIS! IT WAS GREAT!

Gee I wonder what idea you used from me...Queen Cleopatra! Ha ha! It worked out well! Good job.

Fantastic...Bravo...Encore...really encore XD

Keep up the good work chick! You have Chess and Mally growing on me. They make a cute couple in their own way ;)

Can't wait to read more from you.

Krys

Cute story!

Oh, I loved the fact that you wrote a halloween fic for this month!

I just love Halloween!

You get to dress up and no one calls you crazy. Strangely enough, I look better bizarre in black and rags wih glaring eyes than I do in colours...

I'm going as a zombie girl! (perhaps the girl from the ring, I do have the hair and the glare)

I love the costume of Tarrant: the evil Clown. I would've thought that he would dress in something romantic like a pirate with Alice as his wench, but I think it better that you had the characters dress up in scary costumes instead of all lovey dovey. I would've so been scared if some freaky clown with blood everywhere, neon hair, and a hatchet in his hand stormed into the room right now as I write this, laughing!

Have you ever seen Zombieland? Clown in that film is scary!

The idea of McTwisp in the hedgehog costume sounds absolutely adorable! Oooooohhh, I'm just squeeing, thinking about it.

Chess is so sneaky, wanting to be the hero... LOL.

Love your fics. Write more soon!

Okey-Dokey! You asked me to be honest, and honest I shall most definitely be: THIS IS THE BEST THING I'VE READ YET! (Of yours. I have never decided which story on this SITE is my favorite.)

First: the costumes. Absolutely brilliant! Queen Cleopatra Mirana, axe-murderer Tarrant, and especially flamingo Thackery! Oh, I love it! I LOVE it!

Second: Basilio. A great character! Never saw THAT one coming! (No, seriously. I didn't.) I have a similar character in something I'm writing...well, that's water off the bridge. But I do like this guy! Perhaps you may use him in a future story? Not that I'd complain if you don't One-time wonders are wonderful! Ha Ha!

Third: Mally, of course! At points I want to cry with her, at points I'm laughing at her attempt at toughness, and at other points I'm on the edge of my seat as she faces adversary. This is how I see her; a character who is so dynamic you can barely keep up with her! And all throughout this, I totally sympathize. (Hope I spelled that right. I can never remember!) I know, more or less, how she feels at every moment in this story.

If I have any sort of complaint with this, it is only that I felt Basilio was forgiven to easily. I think Mally would be a bit hesitant, or even begrudging. But then, that's just me!

Fantastic work! Please write more!

Sincerely yours,

J. (And if anyone else reads this, feel free to call me that!)

I would be so pissed if someone did a joke like that XD.

good one shot and it's so stupid that we don't celebrate halloween in Holland:(

Yay for halloween!

Early Trick or Treat! :P

I've started on the drss for Alice. But unfortunatly I got a bit carried away when doodling possible hair styles. (I like drawing hair. :D) I'm kinda putting off drawing Tarrant becuase I've decided to stray away from my 'chibified' drawings and do some more... regular drawings (I will keep the eyes though) but in this style I can't draw suits very well... I will face my demons though and will work hard. If you want I've got my scanner up and running and I can send you the pic of Alices dress outline and hair styles. (hehe.. -")

But I won't be able to till tomorrow afternoon becuase I'm heading to glasgow today to see a band.

Can't wait to read your next work!

~MissTreason

This pairing is growing on me like...well I don't have a clever analogy but they are! Again very good job :)