Wow

no

That started off great but ended so terribly

This story is cute! But there is spelling errors, but I can read it all just fine. I find that this story is super adorable. I love it. :)

CHECK YOUR SPELLING!

Awwwwwwwwww!

Demigod who also happens to be part of the avengers and was asked to play the speaking part of Ciel from black butler.

You know what really ticks me off, not the story, but just in general? The fact that every single fanfic has a story line just about the same. There's the, 'he hurts me but I still love him' ones, usually one direction ones. There's also 'she loves to hate me', the 'I fell in love with my best friend', 'we weren't meant to be', and the most obvious one of all, 'the redness of Edward's eyes engulfed me and the thirst for blood tingled through my helpless body bla bla blaah...'

God so help me when there is a fanfic about a disabled child who goes to hogwarts, discovers he's a frickin

great story but if i was u i would describe and writeb 8 chapters YOU NEED TO PRACTICE YOUR WORDS

I loved this odd couple, its great that someone else likes them too

there are wrong spellings please

Black Flash... that name suits the kid pretty good being Raven's kid

omg

I think u should write a 2nd one when Ryan is going to highschool or something like tat!

Bye the way, loved ure story, ending was a bit rushed but that dont matter! Again loved it!:D

eh not bad u rite jinks jinx