can't wait I was really getting into the story

That is wicked to set a man up for abuse, does she understand the ramifications smh. I know she a child but still.

Nice storry and children are children :) that is particularly appealing, because a lot of authors forget about that.

I love it, hope you continue

I've enjoyed this story and eagerly await the next installment.

I loved this story as is! But I won't complain if you plan to give us more! I'm super excited and can barely wait for you to start posting again, so I'll keep checking in to see when you update!
Love
Jenna.

Well, I've enjoyed your story very much so far, although bits did seem a bit out of character at times even with the AU character development. I'm still going to add this one to my following list, mostly so that I have a way to stalk your profile easier for your revised version. ;)

PS: will we get any details about how Hermione's family died in your rewrite? How old was Sev when he went to live with Minerva? (Might I suggest Aunt Minerva and Uncle Severus instead? Sev was something Lily called him, which clearly even in the AU she's still too raw a subject to even be reminded of...and Min just sounds weird and almost as cheap as fans using "Minnie". They ARE rather stern characters, after all. Oh...and Wormie vs Worm, if that's kept. Even as a form of endearment it's far from flattering, especially when yoh consider the "mudblood" issue (worms and mud go hand-in-hand))

OOOHHHHH! interesting! i'm sure you can make a greater story with a fresh mind :D hope to hear from you soon!

Glad to see that this is not abandoned. I really like it.

Please label the story angst, I'm seeing abuse, not family/hurt/comfort.

I enjoy reading your story very much. Your depictions of Hermione and Snape sound realistic to me. I like the idea that you portray Snape as a father figure, a stern one though :P I hope you may continue this wonderful piece with new aspirations. Blessings from Hong Kong.

Great story. Damn that's some perseverance to finish a story. I almost put it down near the beginning, but I'm glad i didn't. I always thought Snape just needed to look beyond his hatred of James to see the real Harry. I look forward to the revamp.

I love this story. I really hope you come back to it one day.

Oh how I love this. I hope you keep writing it :)

Súper good! I hope you continue honestly I want Severus and hermione relationship to be better than never! And I don't want snape died of betray them :( or at least they know and support him but not dead to Severus!