good job!

"Alanna, I'd like to have a talk with you about your behavior after dinner. You are to meet me in my office at the eighth bell. You are dismissed."

...LOL. That sounds like something a school teacher would say to a student.

Nice :)

wow...so probable. and i never even considered...

Although this is well written, I don't think that Alanna would antagonize Numair like this, even if she did resent him.

I really like the idea of this. I think you could have spent a little more time on the characters, making sure they fit into their canon roles. Alanna seemed particularly out of character in this; she's got a temper, but she's not sulky or immature and that's the impression I got from her in this piece.

KrisEleven~

Hmm I'm not sure she would have said it like this... But this was still well-written anyway. It was an understandable reaction and I never really thought about it before. I liked it.

*.* Hahahaha...I liked this a lot! It was very creative of you take Numair and Alanna's friendship this way. I never made the connection between Thom's power and Numair's. Very good indeed! :)