Wow. I thought Kurama would be his Zanpukto, not go to hell. After all, the Shinigami's seal doesn't, just, break. Maybe because he opened it. What about his other friends? Did they go to hell too? Because of how much they killed? It's kinda sad; he can't remember what he lost. He'll probably go there one day, after so long missing his biju. He's not dead, well not completely at least. I think I know what his unsealed Zanpakto would look like in this situation,
"Help me find what's lost, Kyuubi." Naruto says quietly, almost a whisper, yet it still carries to the ears of all the Shinigami. His voice is smooth and meledious, dispite having been used rarely, if ever. It's sad; almost like it's lacking something, something beautiful. Yet it also increases the beauty of it. It's searching, like a young child's, searching for his mother. This part is nearly unnoticeable, like the subtle change of a leaves' shape in a landscape. His Zanpakto changes shape, to a long katana. All of the katana is white, even the blade. White like bones. Like hollow's masks. Nine red ribbons are attached to the hilt, the only variety from the color white on it. The red is dusky, firey. The ribbons curl and move around, almost like being pushed by an invisible breeze. Like the crimson tails of foxes. It has an empty aura about it, much like its wielder. They say Rukia Kuchiki's Zanpakto is the most beautiful of them all. That's a lie. A frickin' lie. His is the most beautiful. Rukia's is pretty, sure, but it's much like its wielder; petite and brash. His is empty, only leaving a sense of loss. Like something you only realized the true value of after you lost it. A bird that left one's side. A beautiful example of what Deidara showed the world with his explosions; his art, his beauty. Many don't realize it, but Zanpaktos have a sense of feelings to them. What their wielders have, a part of their souls. Yamamoto knows this, and wonders what the boy lost. 'Kurama's nine tails and heart, are waiting for me at the gate. Red Queen. And you wonder why you were chosen.'

It's well written, but I don't understand it. At all.

im not exactly sure what to think about it but I did enjoy reading it and it had a refreshing view point change good job.

It looks as if the Kyūbi is in Hell, while Naruto went to Soul Society. Is Naruto so different because the Kyūbi was removed. Since if it wasn't for Kyūbi, Naruto would never have had to become an obnoxious loudmouth to gain attention. Is that what could have been taken from his personality?

~ Lil'AzureKitsune

It looks as if the Kyūbi is in Hell, while Naruto went to Soul Society. Is Naruto so different because the Kyūbi was removed. Since if it wasn't for Kyūbi, Naruto would never have had to become an obnoxious loudmouth to gain attention. Is that what could have been taken from his personality?

~ Lil'AzureKitsune

Something about this story just amazes me to no end...

Awesome story, even for something so short. Ever thought about using this idea in a longer, chaptered fic? I'd think it would be a very enjoyable read.

Well done, at any rate.

Is it gonna be another part with him openin the gate and 9 bujii comin out it would b a good chapter story

it's so sad that it had to end so fast. :'(

I want to read more, but I'll take what I get if you don't want to continue. lol (hint, hint, wink, wink, nudge, nudge)

great job,

:)

Woah. Naruto is way ooc in this. I like it though and wish you would make it into a full story ().

really good.

poor Naruto...

it shows a good bit of promise...looking forward to more.

I absolutely loved this-I went back and reread probably three times. It was amazing everything you could convey by not showing/telling; the correlation between Hell's gate and the gate of Kyuubi's seal, the hint that Kyuubi's in Hell and Naruto's not. That might not be what you meant, but that's what I got, and I loved it. _ I do hope there's eventually more to this on your LJ, but even if there isn't, this stands on its own.

Story started out good ending wasn't really satisfying like there should be more. Like why naruto is like this and is there something about the gate that is related to it.

The fic was good but the ending bothered me, why was Naruto in the Soul Society and so different?