I hope this gets updated someday, though it seems unlikely. This is very good and, yes, it's close to the beginning of The Lost Hero, but it feels fresh. This is the best equivalent of The Son of Neptune I've read, not that I've read many of them, but this one caught my attention. Unlike most of the others.

I like Suraia and Camille. Suraia is adorable and the way she keeps thinking of Percy as her hero makes me smile. Kiddie hero worship is adorable. Camille reminds me of Annabeth about the bossy thing, but there's a difference I can't place at the moment.

Or maybe I'm just annoyed at all the Percabeth in the fandom at the moment (or ever) and am beginning to hate her. Whatever.

You stopped right where it got interesting. I would have loved to read more since I get the feeling that the end of chapter 3 was the point where the parallels with The Lost Hero would have lessened, as to show that even if Percy and co had started out in the same position as Jason and co, they wouldn't have been given the warm welcome Jason, Piper and Leo got.

I like your Camille, who is much better than Piper. You got rid of a Leo-copy since you wouldn't need it now that Percy is here with a sense of humor, and replaced it Suraia, who I have a feeling would have made me squeal. You also made the three of them Girl-Boy-Girl. Most people make them Boy-Boy-Girl. Even Rick Riordan.

It's such a shame that you probably wont continue this. I would read this; it's so much better than reading all those stupidly titled The Son of Neptune fics. You came up with something original, even though you probably came up with everything way before The Son of Neptune was the title of the next book. If you need any help, PM me, OK?

this is really good and can't wait for the next chapter

It's a pity it doesn't look like this is going to get updated. I hope you do, this has to be the best Son of Neptune fic I've ever read. If you want someone to give you a hand with editing or anything, let me know, I really want to see this story continue, and I'd be happy to help you continue in any way I can. Need a rabid fan? I'm it. Need a friend? Count on me. I look forward to more. Good Job and Good Luck D

Really really interesting, this story is. And I am so glad to be reading about Percy's adventures again :O

Just got into the Percy Jackson fandom recently, and after skimming The Lost Hero I was crushed that there was no Percy, only a heartbroken Annabeth. This might just be the perfect balm for that

I found this first on LJ but I didn't have an account... and then I find it here! I love the parallels you put to TLH, and your OCs are definitely not bad. I'll be watching this fic :D

this is awsome, great view of what's to come in the next book.

AWSOME writing, can't wait for your next chapter.

Interesting. ) Please update soon!

Dang...This is by far the BEST post Lost Hero fic I've read, and I've read almost all of them. Thank you so much for sharing! Please, please, please continue this story quickly! I love how you write the characters, and how quickly you've established all of the new characters' personalities! Awesome job! And kudos for giving Percy his sense of humor.

Out of all the fics I've read so far that tell Percy's POV, this is by far the best...telling of Percy's amnesia.

Geez, this story is so freaking good! I love your style of writing-entertaining and easy to understand! I really cannot WAIT for the next chapter!

Love the characters! Love the story! Love Percy's amnesia! Love the writing! Continue!

And thanks for sharing.

Katherine

Wonderfull wonderfull wonderfull! Please update soon!:D:D:D

Awesome chapter! Do hope you continue~

Thanks!

-curledruler

Wow, this is really good. I really would like if you could update soon, because this is really cool. Everything flows well, nice plot, and it actually seemse to be going somewhere. Nice. Update soon.

Great first three chapters. Write more plox

Dude. Great first chapter. read lost hero day came out and cant wait for son of poseidon sequel.

Bro, great story so far. Got high expectations.

You're a decent writer...but I am curious, are you a sucker for some kind of punishment? Almost everything you write here is sure to be contradicted when Son of Neptune comes out. Sure, some things are easy to guess (like your Preator numbers, I'd come to similar conclusions) but...I don't understand why you'd write a fic that is sure to be thrown out as soon as the next series comes out. I feel certain that Riordan knows exactly where Percy is and what has happened to him. So...what's your reasoning?

best ive read so far about Percy side of lost hero

This story is awesome. How long do you update the story?