Reviews for The Rift
levysbookshelf chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
I got so excited when Syaoran kissed Sakura! I was literally cheering out loud I'm glad I was alone for that lol.
ClearMortality chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Oh, I was expecting even just a hint about how Kurogane's and Fai's meeting went. It's somewhat disappointing to realize the story's done and there's no "next" button...
Mary chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Good! Someone else who refers to werewolves as just wolves! I thought I was alone on thinking that it sounds more "real-world" usage.
Also, I think you deserve to know that this is one of my favorite SyaoSaku fics (and I've read ones that are literally publishing worthy) and that they are my ultimate OTP, so thank you for writing a little one-shot like this that I can always come back to and enjoy!
The only thing I wish you'd added a teeny bit more of was a bit more KuroFai than what's already there. You know, "My Alpha mentioned meeting this interesting blond man in a bar once, and I wondered if that was who Sakura was referring to..." or one or two more hints like that.
Otherwise, again, beautiful little fluff with enough suspense to let me enjoy it. Thanks so much! :)
Mashiara91 chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
awwwwwwww so cuuute! syaosaku are always so cute. i loved the world that you've set up and the way you dealt with all the various aspects. but i REALLY REALLY REALLY want you to write it from a kurofai pov...please please please...just a companion fic to this one with those as the main characters. even though i did read between the lines and i do kinda get what happened, i'd still like to see it written out in your awesome style...so PLEASE!
wolf1380 chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
i enjoyed reading very much. i would have liked to have seen the part with fai and kurogane. very sweat ss story.
Shadow over Egypt chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
Oh, this was very, -very- cute. I usually don't read fics that are primarily SS because a.) they're so hard to find sometimes and, b.) they're quite often not so well done - but this was -lovely-. It made me smile, aww and laugh, and left me with a wonderful burbly feeling to carry on into this evening.

Keep up the good work.
m chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
Love the story. Now you just have to write the parallel story that goes with this to tell what happened to Kurogane and Fai.
ulichan chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
This story is really touching and it has a very good moral in it I really enjoyed reading it. I really am

I hope you made more story.

I'll be waiting and looking forward to read your next story
the oxymoron chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Aaaawww. Cute! You're such a good writer! And I'm totally wearing purple on the 20th, it's nice to hear someone else is doing it too. :)