Ow WOW! Can’t believe that this is all that will be of this GREAT STORY! Really I usually romance Lelianna Every play through and usually want any story to explore something with her but in this I can remember why I had such a difficult time as I played the game Morrigan is just such a good option too and after all that is going I can’t help but want to see Her give herself to love and the angry kiss lines where she tells him to leave her and she calls him a selfish bastard and kisses him also I hope that unlike the “game” version this Morrigan actually turns her “nighttime” activities up a notch with our Deamon carrying friend lol and even up to the point where he undergoes the joining either with or in place of Loghrain and they make the “fail safe” but maybe here after the changes brought he starts as something more.

I demand an immediate update to this intriguingly amazing story my talented author!

Demon sealed in his arm... does he have white hair and an eyepatch as well as some magic crystal all seeing eye?

How the F is that an SI?

Swords aren’t heavy at all now maybe very crude and poorly made swords sure. But even then they aren’t so heavy that someone would complain about the weight of it especially if it’s made for one hand.

Wow, touching backstory of Malcom. So Ventus is elf?

I know this story has not been updated for a long time, but still it is a very nice story so far, I hope you will complete it someday.

Good tryst, making Duran king was best, and in game inspite of all machinations, Bhelen was better than Harrowmont.

Nice twist, appearance of Duran and Sigrun.

Different scenes from Ventus's real life on Earth were impressive, so did he get out of coma and went in to ECT (shock therapy) or he imagined two realities. Intersting.

Oh who were those people he killed? Good chapter.

Elyssa is this much pragmatic towards Loghain this early in game? Without him nothing would have happened, Howe would have killed Couslands years ago if he could, he didn't because he needed support, Howe might have been the sword but force behind every evil act was Loghain's paranoia and distrust, something we have seen in our real world tyrants.

Yups I had two simultaneous playthorughs too, male noble warden romancing Morrigan and female noble romancing Alistair. So I get it why you did that too. ;-)

However my Canon is Aedan/Morrigan/Goes through Eluvian/God Child.

Great, so there is some hidden power in Ventus.
Great idea of fade dream about projections, loved it.

This story is getting more interesting, Wynne knows about Ventus! Suspense. Suspense.

This is Sparta, I laughed so hard on this.

Ventus is using his knowledge in innovative way, the barricade at lake is intuitive idea.

Really funny, especially conversation with Morrigan. I like how the character is trying to hide his foreknowledge from companions.

Had seen a lot of, 'girl thrown in to Thedas' situations, this is first guy story I came across, and since I am a guy, I got partial to this one. Well done. Also liked humour in this story. Great.