Jack Kline vibes

Dark Merlin is AMAZING

and my dude if you don't do a sequel I will find you and I will cause you grievous bodily harm. joking although seriously I loved your story deffo needs more

Morgana confuses me. And her complete change from loving, merciful, charitable and very honourable to whatever she became in season 3. It's pretty depressing and honestly I blame her sister if she stayed away all wouldve been right.

what the fuck did I just read. This was brilliant just brilliant!

Hm just gotta point out Morgause is Morgana's half sister through their mother in the show. (Obviously the legend is being only loosely followed)

Very intense. I just wish to see how things played out further.

By the way, Morgana has a lot of nerve returning to Camelot and trying to pretend nothing happened. I'd have loved to see Merlin torture her a bit. Or better yet, her returning to her senses and switching sides.

This was amazing! Keep writing!

This story was perfect, I read it straight through even though it's 3am and I have to get up early tomorrow (today?)... Worth it.
I'd be very interested in a sequel and I'm going to head over to your profile to see what other brilliant Merlin stories you have :D

Oh how I love a good Dark!Merlin, and you portray him wonderfully ;)

I never thought that I would enjoy dark!Merlin so much... My favorite part was probably when Merlin said "Who's Merlin?" to Arthur. I got CHILLS. I should also mention how much I love it when people overhear Merlin talking to someone. It's my favorite reveal trope! Thank you for such an amazing story.

Brilliant reveal, and an interesting resolution with a good set up for a sequel should you desire to continue. Not a bad place to leave it if you end up not continuing (although it will leave a few loose ends). Thank you for writing and posting!

Okay, I think that this is one of my favorite reveals ever. I cannot believe that Merlin just admitted to having magic like that. I'm dead from laughter XP

LolXD
*confesses to having magic*
*might be executed*
"Oh crap"

Excellent story - I love the situation you created where Arthur and Morgana had to have full knowledge and work together.

Good fic so far but I think you need a beta.
Some mistakes:
Third paragraph: 'a very strong erg' should be 'a very strong urge'.
Tenth paragraph: 'The next few seconds made Arthur utterly stunned' should be 'The next few seconds stunned Arthur utterly' - later in that paragraph 'reverberated of the stone ways' should be 'reverberated off the stone walls'.
Paragraph that starts with 'Just remember that your life': Later in that paragraph 'Yep, defiantly a threat' should be 'Yep, definitely a threat'. End of paragraph 'fought of nausea' should be 'fought off nausea'
Paragraph that starts with 'We've already had this conversation': Later in paragraph 'You do this through blood thrust and revenge' should be 'You do this through blood lust and revenge'
Paragraph that starts with 'His former slip up': End of first sentence: 'with an iniquity snort' you should probably choose a different word - not 'iniquity'. Later in paragraph: 'Gwen turned completely rigged' should be 'Gwen turned completely rigid'
Paragraph that starts with 'After a short pause': Middle of paragraph: 'Arthur realised a breath' should be 'Arthur released a breath'

These are just a few of the ones that are most prominent, there are a few more minor mistakes though...

I'll continue reading now...