This is lovely! It fits so well with the book it might as well be canon ;)

I like this. I like this a lot. Zacharias is so wonderfully unlikeable, and it's almost depressing that he lives to regret it and Colin doesn't. Great job.

Just terrific. I love Colin, and I love that he managed to shame Zacharias. It worked so well.

This should've been in the book:D

Just stumbled across this - I really like it. I always think everyone turns Zacharius into a bad guy, and I don't think he is really. Great ending too!

Poor Colin...

Nice, I am glad that Colin was able to knock some sense into Zacharias.

'I hope I live to regret this.'

ooo... chills! this was great. i really loved it. especially what he said to himself as he was crawling back through the portrait hole. haha. i love colin too btw. :)