Reviews for Falling without gravity |
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breakfastmakesmeawesome chapter 1 . 8/19/2012 I just wanted to say that your perspective in this chapter is beautiful in its objectivity. I really admire this chapter and how you "treated" the subject matter discussed between Angela and Brennan: beautiful and eloquent in its clarity andnd, IMO, mature, respectful and a tribute to the relationships of all involved. |
ocgirl.fr chapter 4 . 6/9/2011 As soon as I read that she was singing the Keep on Tryin song, I began playing the song, which made the whole chapter so much more (and it was already a lot) powerful! I think its one of the best chapter I have ever read on Bones FF! Thanks ! |
xoxokiss210 chapter 12 . 1/21/2011 i loved |
SMH chapter 12 . 1/9/2011 Ok ive read ever chapter and have formed an opinion of this fic...the story is ok but a bit overly dramatic at times...also while i understand this is supposed to be very angsty, it also is very out of character..brennan is not such a train wreck and would never act in such ways you portray her...i mean attemptin murder is believable however i think you wording when writing makes the reader think she is crazy rather than hurt (i cant really feel her pain but more see her coo-coo ness.) jus work on you writing skill a bit more in terms of being over dramatic...if you go too far the story just seem really fake. Ps. I agree with u about hannah but i think you hold her a bit too high on a pedastool for her own good...she has a fierceness/attitude to her in he show but you make seem light a saint in you fic. Keep improving though :) -take this as encouargement however/constructive critisism and not me attackin your story. I think your a good promising writer thts why i did comment. |
ChaleseWinchester789 chapter 12 . 12/10/2010 AWWW THAT WAS SO CUTE I LOVED IT PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!:) |
my-completeness chapter 12 . 12/9/2010 Great chapter. You absolutely nailed writing Sweets, such a good job! |
Caskett-41319 chapter 11 . 12/9/2010 haha that last review was meant to say please update! |
Caskett-41319 chapter 12 . 12/9/2010 just found this story please review! |
nertooold54 chapter 12 . 12/9/2010 Excellent chapter, more than worth my time. Sweets' talk was so heart-felt. |
jsboneslover chapter 12 . 12/9/2010 Musie, This was a WONDERFUL chapter, full of reality, heart and love. It's a great story that you're telling, and you are telling it with style and art. I hope your own emotional wounds are healing. Thank you for providing entertainment for others despite your own issues. |
TwoBecomeOne chapter 12 . 12/9/2010 So happy to see a new chapter! I think you captured sweets and brennan perfectly! |
horseninja chapter 12 . 12/9/2010 I thought it was good. I don't really think what happened was Sweet's fault because he didn't tell Booth what to say and certainly didn't tell him to say it was a gamble but I could see how he might think it was his fault. I am sorry about your aunt. I hope your exam went well. |
LostGiraffe2 chapter 11 . 11/26/2010 I just read this whole story now...omg it's AMAZING! You are a brilliant writer D and yes, Brennan's face in the promo broke me :( |
Hotforteacher3 chapter 11 . 11/24/2010 MORE! |
LJLanham chapter 11 . 11/24/2010 Just found this... I'm sorry I didn't comment on each chapter, but I couldn't stop reading. This is really fantastic. It's painful and full of angst, but beautiful and hopeful at the same time. |