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This is great! I hope Rose loses to darkness at least once. xD I know it hasnt been updated in forever but like I can still hope :D

por favor mas capitulos, que rose quede con adrian

I lov it & mak rose & adrian stay together they r so nice together & mak rose pregnant it would spice things up a bit & adrian goes 2 join them on the trip

damn I was wishing there was more of this...it was awesome! except roses conflicting thoughts on the Russian prick she notices every tiny thing about the asshole...his cheek twitched as if he was gonna smile (who cares? its like if he did smile at her she would just fall inlove all over again) please lets not forget that he treated her like complete shit and its not even that he doesn't love her anymore besides that just cause he doesn't love her he was gonna leave her in jail to rot what the fuck is that? fucking asshole doesn't deserve her just like Adrian said.

I gotta say those lemons are weak as fuck...rose may not have a lot of sexual experience but she is rose Hathaway not some other 18 year old girl...she knows how to seduce a man. and if she had indeed gone ALL night long with dimitri surely she picked up on what pleases a man...but you have her acting like a scared little virgin...I just don't want to read about rose like this...

funny after that incident at the jail...I thought rose would have broken up with Adrian when he showed up grinning at her door
"what are you doing here Adrian?" the grin slipped off his face "ive come to see my girlfriend" I scowled at him "really? well where is she?" my words caused a frown to form on him handsome face "lil dhampir, rose im sorry for what I said, I love you, please don't break up with me!" "when I had just lost the man I loved you used my weakness to your advantage I needed money to hunt him and you used it to make me promise to date you...and though ive grown to love you you took advantage of me and now your using the way I felt for dimitir as a reason to cheat on me! You say that I cant say anything when you cheat because I missed/pined for dimitri but you were the one that pushed for a relationship knowing that I wasn't ready, knowing how I felt! and so because of how I felt you are allowed to kiss other girls...fuck them too? and I cant say anything!" "well you can kiss and fuck whoever you want and I cant say a damn thing because your single..doesn't that make little Adrian so happy" I glared at adrians disbelieving face and slammed the door!
there I wrote it for you! she can take him back after some serious groveling on adrians part!

she was locked up for a week? and she looks terrible? really? LOL
that's so stupid
how could a week in jail destroy rose hathaways looks? it couldn't stop being stupid...

I find it quite disgusting that rose had to beg for his help...rose is the only reason hes fucking alive right now and he doesn't have the desincey to help her...prick...and the fact that rose didn't point that out pisses me the hell off. and this jeesica girl is sending people to retreave Adrian whilst hes visiting rose...and im sure Jessica knows damn well that he doesn't spend much time there...and shower or no shower rose can wear he hair up so she looks halfway decent...her hairs long enough to put up without a fuckin hair tye and im sure shes not that pale...she wasn't tan from the sun...shes hardly in the fucking sun...shes naturally tanned so she cant look that bad...jail doesn't destroy your looks ya know...sure maybe shes lost weight but I doubt its that much cause they do feed her and she isn't losing a lot of calories because shes not working out so she doesn't need massive amounts of food anymore

she was only in jail for a week?
and she lost a shit ton of weight, got pale lost all her muscle and looked like death? that doesn't even make since. stupid is what that is shit I thought she had been in there for months

So I just found this story. You haven't updated in a very long time, so you probably won't even read this review. But I'm gonna write it anyway! Because I think your writing is amazing. This story is absolutely one of the greatest I've read and I wanna thank you for posting it. Its a pity that you haven't finished it. I'm gonna add it to my favourites and follow it anyway, if you ever decide to finish it.
Thanks again for a great story!

PLEASE WRITE MORE

great story, hope you update soon.

i just came across your fic and started reading it, its very good and hope that you are going to continue it i always thought rose should end up with adrian in the book

that was good keep it up