This is good, I just hope you come back and finish it one day!

This is really good! Please complete it :)

Great chapter!

I can't wait to see what Georgina's going to do!

Update Soon!

Great chapter!

It seems like you are in some kind of rush? I like Bart's presence and I loved Eleanor's intervention, but why rush through it. I was really disappointed that the dinner with his father was cut short into a couple of lines.

Another thing is that you seem to be afraid of writing Chuck and Blair scenes? Those you have are either an end or a beginning of a moment and they are either at the beginning or the end of the chapter. like the last scene. We didn't even get to see how they got into the bed, I mean you could have described how they kissed how they looked at one another how her clothes were still on his floor from when he tore them off, etc... Such a short symbollic scene is good when you have loads of other scenesin past chapters, but you don't.

And now Georgina is here. We haven't even gotten to see how they have fallen so deeply in love and how they matured, and already you bring in trouble.

What I DID like was the comment about university applications. I think it's very realistic that Chuck would apply to Yale and with Bart's help he'd get in def. However, he would keep it a secret until the last minute cause as much as he seems to be pretending to not wanting to have the "where is this relationship going" discussion, the truth is that he wants everything she does and at a much faster pace - and he's afraid of rejection, so instead he springs up these things as surprises so she won't have time to woverthink and reject him.

When you love someone truly, no matter how much you trust them you will always be insecure, jealous, envious, worried, not because you have doubt in them but because you doubt you're good enough FOR them, and one's simply afraid of somebody better comming along nad taking your place.

Loved it! More Bart Bass please!

Great chapter!

Leave it to Eleanor to be the one putting a damper on Blair's newfound relationship with Chuck.

I'm glad you had Blair stick-up for herself and her relationship with Chuck, as well. After all, everything that had been said was true (it makes sense in this story).

Can't wait to find out, what'll happen next. So, until then.

Loved it

this is a really great story. i look forward to more.

I loved the fight between Chuck and

Can't wait to read next chapter.

Chuck and Nate at war...amazing! They should've done this on the show. I'm excited for the upcoming chapters!

Rlly good chapter!

I only wish your chapters were longer

About hte Georgina thing - well I def. think that she would stir up trouble since hse was Chuck's first and no matter how much he hates her Blair will always feel insecure around her and Georgina will always be jealous of the Snow White princess who caught the Bass.

However, before bringing her in I think maybe you ought to work on the Chuck and Blair connection. They haven't had one scene together really sicne the confession. Not to meniton that perhaps her involvement should come up much much later on in the middle of the impending family drama that will soon break out with Both the Archibalds and Waldorfs trying to break Chuck and Blair up. In fact I hald suspect that Nate might be the reason why Georgina would be back from Conneticut... and i bet Eleanor would only be happy to help Howard Archibald to get Blair back - then again they have Bart Bass against them... so it's a tie really

Intense chapter!

Especially, the fight between Chuck and Nate.

As for, dragging Georgina into this mess, that will certainly cause a stir. Especially, between Blair and Chuck.

Curious, as to what'll happen next. So, until then.

Loved it so much! Please no geogina!