a very good read. there is an underlying tone of depression and angst tht i lovein stories and i am very happy tht you took the to write this and tht i stumbled apon it. well done indeed.

Hello, this is the first time that I leave a review in english fics (because I dont speak that language and Im a beast at writing in it) But you have just a few reviews for this story and thats not fair! Ive been reading fics for years, so I can be a judge in this theme. This is a really really good fic: well written, good scenes, good dialogues. I liked it a lot, so Im just letting you know that you did a really good work.

Just wanted to let you know that I.

I love you :)

Wow.

That was a great piece of work, and I normally don't have patience with reading long pieces unless they're in chapters-but I read this entire thing non-stop. I have to blame you a little bit though, you just initiated an old fan in me I thought was long gone, ha.

I love how OOC this is, but how at the same time it seems so real. Great job, as always.

This is by far the best fanfic I have ever read, anywhere, on any series. I love how it's written in 2nd person, so it sucks the reader right in to Matt's-Mail's-mind, not just narrating his story. Thank you so much for writing it- I have a feeling I'll be reading it over and over, years from now, even after I'm no longer in this Death Note phase. You are an incredible writer, thank you for sharing this.

I really, really love your writing style, and I love a lot of this oneshot. My only problem is personal - I despise yaoi! (The reason I was reading this fic in the first place is that sometimes when people say something is Matt/Mello it can be seen as just a friendship fic, and I can't get enough of these guys.) Then by the time I went, 'Oh no, it is going to be yaoi,' I had gotten interested enough in your writing style and the other material presented that I chose to ignore the few openly slash moments.

Second person writing is something a lot of people find difficult. You handled it very well. Like I said, I love most of it that isn't yaoi.

And hey - it's got Matt! The world needs More Matt!

D: Just wondering- what language does Mello know before English?

Kickass story, btw~! XD

Amazing. I really don't have time to write the review this deserves because I have to be at work soon- but I LOVED this story. A lot.

All in all, my impression of it was, it was great. It was just so Matt, and so... absolutely fitting, but not really. It's like reading a story from another person's eyes.

It may just be that I've always been a sucker for characters like Matt, like those guys in the sidelines that never get their chance at the spotlight, simply because they remind me of me. Well, I loved it anyway, for pretty obvious reasons.

At some parts, it seemed a bit... gramatically incorrect? Still, it sort of mushes together to a reader, simply because it's just that good and great and not even words could describe it.

I don't know how to describe this in words, but I know this story is most likely one of the best stories I have ever read. It's so amazing and breathtaking! Don't stop writing!

Damn. I think scrambled took the words right out of my mouth. That was truly and utterly amaaazing(;

Oh. My god.

This was... I mean... oh, dammit, I have no words.

It was just so... so Matt. The very essence of who his character is. The entire thing was so very beautiful, and bittersweet. The second-person POV fit this absolutely perfectly, and I can't think of a single way to make it any better. I want to go on and on and on about this, but I can't because it's too much. (Too much to grasp all in one go, I mean. This made me want to cry in the best way possible.)

Amazing. Truely truely amazing. Never, ever stop writing.

-Eggy