I freakin love this!
Too bad we didn't get to see the credit that Neal deserved for this.
He ran to the bomb location for Peter for crying out loud.
A civilian, an ex-con!
He should have gotten a medal or sentence reduce.

I was holding my breath from one chapter to the next, certain they would make it out alive but still stressed. Thanks for writing.

nice

I loved it! Great writing

nice, and I could see Neal doing something like that

Lovely!
Yeah, Neal would definitely go after Peter. As Peter would definitely do the same for Neal. They love each other! Duh.

OMG! I'm so worry. The suspense...
Will they make it? Of course they will, it's not a death fic. I hope Neal injured more than Peter. That way, every one will appreciate him more, take care of him, admire him.

Great story, great tension.

HOLY CRAP THIS WAS GOOD!

Great story. I can easily see Neal running after Peter and closer to the bomb to free him. Great job!

Excellent fic. Everyone was in character and I could easily see things going down like that in an episode. Great work _

This was absolutely wonderful! I'll be sure to check your page out after this story. It was just perfect! :)

i did like it! it was suspenseful! i coulda used more Neal whump but thats just me lol _

Great job on this. I've enjoyed it thus far and anxiously await the next part.

I really enjoyed this story. I liked the set-up (interesting that Peter was locked in the room with a bomb about to blow up)and the dialogue. I particularly liked how you handled the Ruiz character, giving him some depth. Well done.